Hi. FYI, I chanced upon your journal somehow, and I'd like to point out some stuff.
1. " I am still struggling to hold on to my freedom and the naivete of my youth..." You cant have both; this sentence contradicts too much.
2. I have visited Stratford-upon-Avon and the last time I check, there were no sightings of cliffs; even more so a rich history of prince and princes. Unless of course, you are referring to Cardiff, (where I come from) which couldnt possib;y have been the case.
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1. " I am still struggling to hold on to my freedom and the naivete of my youth..." You cant have both; this sentence contradicts too much.
2. I have visited Stratford-upon-Avon and the last time I check, there were no sightings of cliffs; even more so a rich history of prince and princes. Unless of course, you are referring to Cardiff, (where I come from) which couldnt possib;y have been the case.
Goodluck!
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