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A couple of my pups interacted with Brennan in a couple of RPGs and I enjoyed every interaction. Unfortunately, we're now not both part of the same games anymore and it's a shame. I still read Brennan keenly, though. You were a pleasure to RP with.
Thank you so much! I'm sure I enjoyed our roleplays as well. :) I have yet to have a bad interaction with anyone. I hope our pups will run into each other again someday.
You play Brennan well but the grammar in your tags annoys me. You leave out the commas in your dialog and it bothers me so much I almost can't stand reading your posts.
"This is dialog," she said.
There should be a comma before the end quote mark! Otherwise you play her well and I love your portrayal.
Wow. Okay. You definitely could have said something before now, especially if it bothers you that much. :) Seriously, I'm always up for constructive criticism and I am the first to admit I am not the greatest at grammar when it comes to writing in that form. I've mostly spent a lot of time writing term papers which generally don't have dialog. Even then I had comma issues.
I'll try to remember them more often! Now I'll prob have a million commas because I'll be worried I'm leaving them out. hehe
Glad you like the characterization though. Thank you.
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ooc note: LMFAO! the dream of many a man. and prob a few women.
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(ooc: Absolutely! X3)
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"This is dialog," she said.
There should be a comma before the end quote mark! Otherwise you play her well and I love your portrayal.
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I'll try to remember them more often! Now I'll prob have a million commas because I'll be worried I'm leaving them out. hehe
Glad you like the characterization though. Thank you.
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