Fanfiction #07 - All Gone

[sapphire_child]

Title: All Gone
Rating/warnings: PG
Genre: future fic, angst
Characters: Charlie, Aaron, Charlotte (OC), Liam, Karen, Meghan
Spoilers: season one
Summary: Charlie returns to the real world but soon finds that the island took more from him than he realised.
Original Post Date: 28/08/2005
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Comments

[meagan4dominic]

Aww. [rushes over to Charlie & hugs] I never read your fic 'Waiting, Gone, Leaving' you probably posted it before I joined the CC island. Anyway this was so beautiful. I love Charlotte's love for the imaginary peanut butter, that's so precious! Charlie's emotion was really raw & I just wanted to go up to him & hug him. The mention of the tea & the peanut butter just totally own it though, lol. I loved it just really emotional & nice

[sapphire_child]

Yeah, I posted W,G,L at the beginning of january last year so that'd probably be why. When I get up to it, I'll repost it in full again.

This fic has always made me incomparably sad - if nothing else then for the way Charlie's sadness affected me as I was writing it. My favourite bit in the whole fic is: Charlie closes his eyes and old memories spill over his cheeks and onto his cold fingers. He’s nearly forty. He will never be young again. something about that line I've always loved and it's one of my own favourite lines from my fics.

Thanks for r/ring!

[meagan4dominic]

Ooh yay! [claps hands together excitedly]

Aww, the fic is really sad & I reckon you wrote it well

[sapphire_child]

Lol, it won't be for a fair while yet but hey, why not =)

Thanks again ^_^

[charliepaceluv]

i know you wrote this a really long time ago, and you just finnished and put out your 100th fanfic. (congrats by the way), but i thought i'd read through the rest of what you had written...this was very very very well written, i like the whole PB thing. and i cried when Charlie said that he had to kill Claire, and how he left everything that he was back on the islan with the spirit of Claire.....this was a beautiful story.

[sapphire_child]

I did indeed! I'm so thrilled that this fic was just as good as my 100th - I have standards! Whoot!

This has always been one of my favourite fics, hands down. I think I like it better a singular piece rather than as a part of my fic trilogy "Waiting, Gone, Leaving" too. Thank you for stopping by to review! Hope you enjoy all my other fics too!

[charliepaceluv]

i have really enjoyed all your other fics. they're sooooo well, written! LOVE YOUR WORK!!!

[sapphire_child]

Thank you! ^_____^ I'm so glad you like my stuff!