AWW! [melts into puddle of goo] Okay so you know how i love all your stories well this beats all of them this is seriously my fav that you've written...at the moment but my fav nevertheless. It was just so perfect, their cute/shy relationship & how cutely excited Charlie was when he felt the baby move. & you fit it into the show so perfectly like providing more reasons why Claire may have moved up to the caves beside just the cuteness of Charlie & this is only the first part [gets all excited for the second part]
Lol. I always loved this fic - from the moment the idea first came to me I always knew it'd be one of my favourites and it still is. I'll post the next part today for you ^_^
This is so soothing to read. The dialogue feels so natural and so perfectly in character. I love the little details that let you know Charlie is trying to cover up his withdrawral twitches. I loved the part about Charlie ranting about his "intense dislike for seagulls". That felt very Charlie. Claire was at her sweetest in the early eppys of S1 and you capture her so well. Ah, the good old days...
Well as all us Charlie fans know - his withdrawal was over so quickly that I kind of feel like I have to make note of it from time to time. I'm so pleased you picked up on that! *happy sigh* ahhhh the good old days indeed!
Ohh i just loved the part about the shells!!! It was so great!!!Can i add you to my friends list i just love your fanfictions!! I'm Katie by the way your Ellin right?
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