Do Not Breathe [Bully Writing Experiment #1]

[faith_harris]

Breathing just makes you zen, and zen doesn’t help one iota. Deep-breathing is being underwater, shallow breathing is running head first into a wall while being ass-raped by an ape wearing a Russel mask.

This is not good. This is not survival. This is wasting away to the fingernail on chalkboard sounds of your mother’s voice and shame. This is

Comments

[redbeanbun]

ended up weird? no way, this is the kind of insane Gary thought-isms that make me love your writing. You make him sound unbalanced, but also at the same time, I could see where he's coming from. I can see just a really unhappy kid doing something like that. And nobody in the room has any idea what's going on in his head. its this strong disregard for his own body and surroundings which kinda sorta, humanizes him. That's the weird part for me. but weird good.