Promise Ring

Feb 26, 2009 23:55

This is a fic i did for the secret santa fic exchance over at th_fanfic. I just uhm, might have forgotten to post it here... haha.

Title: Promise Ring
Fandom: Tokio Hotel
Pairing(s): Tom/Bill (mentioned Georg/Gustav)
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: I do not own anything regarding Tokio Hotel and I do not claim any knowledge of these events to be true. Written ( Read more... )

twincest, bill/tom, tokio hotel

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steinsgrrl May 23 2009, 21:00:54 UTC
I have NO idea why I didn't review when you posted this at Christmas, because I really loved it. Bill's masturbation scene was very hot! I loved him using Tom's shirt, and having such a lovely glass dildo was a nice touch.

Bill's pain when he realized the ring was gone made my chest ache. The description of him crying on his bed was really good, and I could almost feel his pain.

His relief and joy when Tom came in and gave him the ring made me smile and I loved that discovery they had of each others feelings. The sex ...the love-making was very good, very sweet and caring and I really loved how Tom didn't want to just jump on him and bang him, but make it last because he knew Bill had been waiting for it so long.

This was just a lovely story. You said in comments on th_fanfic that this is your first TH fic, and I really hope it's not your last.

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fairyeyez27 May 23 2009, 22:39:09 UTC
-squees- I'm happy you loved it so much, that makes me dance on the inside.

My favorite part of writing the longing and build up is making the end result worth it. Having them get lost in each other and being perfect... I enjoy reading the frantic passion, but i like to write it this way.

And i plan to write more TH fics... i'm just in the middle of soooo much! lol. I'm working on a harry potter fanfic that is nearly 35k and still progress... plus im working, taking online classes and working on a screenplay... soo.. yea. haha. I hope to play with these boys more though, they're so much fun ^^

If you liked this I think you should read my 4-part jrock fic. Even if you don't know the chars its my favorite of anything i've written.

http://fairyeyez27.livejournal.com/2878.html This is the first part :)

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