"The Step"

Aug 29, 2010 02:16

Title: The Step
Pairing: Sulu/Chekov
Rating: R
Warnings: Sexual content
Kink Request: "Chekov is uncomfortable with the way Sulu is always wanting to be with him and take care of him and kissnhug him, because he never grew up with that kind of affection."

The Step )

chekov/sulu, star trek reboot

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ljismahname August 29 2010, 07:33:21 UTC
Oh my goodness...
This is so beautiful. I seriously teared up and then let out a little sob at the end there. Perfect end line.
Honestly like the way you described Chekov's feelings on love and relationships is basically how I feel so it was really nice to read about someone changing his feelings on the subject while keeping it realistic.
Thank you. I adored this ♥

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fairhearing August 31 2010, 21:21:00 UTC
Thank you! I wanted it to be ~dramatic~ but realistic, too -- those are usually my fav kinds of stories to both read and write. :)

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_profiterole_ August 29 2010, 12:13:24 UTC
That was a beautiful story! I really like Chekov's POV here and how Sulu gets him to change. <3

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fairhearing August 31 2010, 21:22:02 UTC
Thanks so much!

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hollycomb August 29 2010, 13:15:41 UTC
I was just craving a story like this so intensely yesterday - thank you for writing this, it's amazingly satisfying! I love this Chekov so much, and the moment when he realizes what he's done and runs to Sulu just aches so wonderfully. ;__;

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fairhearing August 31 2010, 21:22:42 UTC
Yes that was the MOMENT OF CULMINATION in my mind. ;_; Thanks for reading ♥

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secretsolitaire August 29 2010, 14:36:39 UTC
God, Pavel's childhood made me so sad. I love the image of Hikaru hugging him every night to make up for what he lacked from his parents.

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fairhearing August 31 2010, 21:25:07 UTC
Yes, a lifetime of making up for it, which I think is a situation they're both happy with. ;)

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ruefull August 29 2010, 14:54:55 UTC
This was lovely, and such an unexpected take on Chekov. But I could see it, completely, and you wrote it beautifully. Wonderful characterizations, and gorgeous writing, just a lovely treat!

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fairhearing September 1 2010, 19:43:55 UTC
Thanks so much!

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