"Formative"

[fairhearing]

Title: Formative
Pairing: Sulu/Chekov
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Probably nothing bad, I promise, but if you are worried, highlight to view (because they're SURPRISES!!!) --> Explicit sex, language, unwitting roleplay, SPANKING
Request: "Sulu is a cop and Chekov is his eager rookie partner"... OR IS HE???
Note: Originally written for the teamgoldxchange fest, for Hollycomb.

Comments

[ljismahname]

HAHAHAHAHA OH MY WORD THIS IS BRILLIANT.
I laughed. Out loud. Way too hard. Particularly at:
"Is this a porno?"
and
"In that case, I would like to talk about spanking,"
Sulu watching cop porn and the sunglasses and falling asleep after sex XD
Not to mention how hot. I mean you've got spanking and Chekov calling him 'Sir'...UNF. Delicious.

*ahem* Sorry for drooling all over your fic there...

[fairhearing]

Haha, thank you! Yes this was basically a shameless cheat in order to get all the hot angsty parts of an AU with the cute silly parts of Space Shenanigans. I'm glad to hear it seems to have worked ;D

[fairhearing]

There is nothing better to hear than that Sulu's adorably gruff policeman spanking the shaky concept of subtlety out of Chekov has made someone happy. err wait a minute

[fairhearing]

"Well, yes, but really no,"

lollll I was HOPING someone might notice this line of dialogue! My thinking is, once Chekov's said something, he's too busy to go back and double-check that it's actually made sense, HE'S GOT TOO MUCH TO DO. Like get Sulu to spank him again.

[littlemissgg]

I actually laughed out loud at one point

"is this a Porno?"

Brilliant!! Loved the whole thing - great work!

[fairhearing]

Haha, you know Chekov was totally delighted at his discovery. Thank you!

[easilymused1956]

Chekov doesn't have a subtle bone in his body, does he? Lalala

Sweetly hot story.

Renee

[fairhearing]

Subtle is just another word for slow, according to Chekov, and I'm sure he has just as much patience as he does subtlety. ;)

[secretsolitaire]

Bwahahaha, this is hilarious and really, really hot. *fans herself*

[fairhearing]

Just what I was trying for! Thank you!