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faile_neume

Fic: Compassion

Jun 02, 2009 23:40

Title: Compassion
Fandom: DC
Characters: Tim Drake/Jaime Reyes
Rating: PG
Warnings: None
Word Count: 1, 078
Author's Notes: Posting this because I feel like I haven't posted fic in ages. This is part of a work in progress that got sidelined for a while but this bit works well enough on it's own so I thought I'd post it. In regards to what happens with ( Read more... )

character: jaime reyes, fanfic, character: timothy drake, pairing: tim/jaime

Comments 8

aravistarkheena June 2 2009, 16:53:40 UTC

Jesus, rough night. Poor Jaime. D:

I love how Jaime insists that Tim use his real name. :D

faile_neume June 3 2009, 07:32:26 UTC

I'd feel sorry for him. But he did just get a shower with Timmy and is now being cuddled by him.

Tim should be more of a gentlemen, after you see someone naked you have to use their real name. And buy them dinner.

iesika August 28 2009, 04:14:08 UTC

Aren't you supposed to buy the dinner before you see them naked?

Damn, I've been doing it wrong for years!

faile_neume August 28 2009, 04:15:21 UTC

Clearly it's naked first and dinner second!

It's much more fun that way.

Thread 6

iesika August 28 2009, 04:19:29 UTC

Look, I am commenting!

I really liked this (I love h/c, like, woah). I liked Jaime's vulnerability and Tim's...Timness (except in my head, rereading this, Tim is totally copping a feel with the naked-inna-bed thing, even if it is useful. I'm sure he's got a Bat-Heating-Pad or Bat-Mylar-Blanket around somewhere, he just wanted Naked Time). I asked for the timestamp because the story seems to leave off kind of abruptly...There's all this great build up, and then Jaime falls asleep, the end. I totally understand that you were probably writing to an image, and getting them snuggly in bed and naked was your image, but there's so much potential and I hate to see you waste it! You can go with wake up sex,Naked Awkwardness, or even some combination of the two!

faile_neume August 28 2009, 04:23:18 UTC

Epic comment is epic! But thanks, Timmy isn't copping a feel! He's much more professional than that (okay, well maybe he's copping a feel a bit)

This was part of an EPIC THING that got really frustrating so I posted part of it in the hope it would get me motivated again, but it didn't. Maybe writing timestamp fic will work.