[Naruto: triage]

May 11, 2008 23:36

Title: Triage
Fandom: Naruto
Rating: PG-13
Wordcount: 7838
Notes: Ohgodfinally *collapses*. I started writing this quite a few weeks ago* as an idle experiment, because I love OT3s and I wanted to see what I could do with the Sasuke/Naruto/Sakura dynamic, but it turned out to be more fiddly and time-consuming than I would have liked. Also rather ( Read more... )

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akapiratequeen May 12 2008, 01:43:34 UTC
That grabbed my heart like woah and now I can't forget it. Amazing work. Please tell me you've written more, and where I can find it.

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fahye May 12 2008, 03:52:52 UTC
Aw, thank you :) And I have written a few other Naruto fics, though this is my first bash at OT3 fic.

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book_people May 12 2008, 02:38:47 UTC
Got here from Asuka's lj.

...Oh, man, am I ever glad I clicked that link. This feels so real in so many ways. Reading this makes my heart ache, though it's not really a bad sort.

Thank you for posting!

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fahye May 12 2008, 03:53:43 UTC
Not-really-bad heartache is just what I was aiming for :D Thanks heaps for commenting, I'm glad you liked it.

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bootoye May 12 2008, 02:46:04 UTC
Very nice team interplay. I loved Sakura's POV

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fahye May 12 2008, 03:54:57 UTC
Thank you! I love writing Sakura, she's one of my favourite characters.

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stripedpetunia May 12 2008, 03:11:02 UTC
That was fabulous. Outstanding characterization and some totally sexy bits. Thank you. <3 (came here via askerian's rec)

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fahye May 12 2008, 03:56:06 UTC
Thanks so much! I'm kind of terrible at writing actual porn, but it's good to know that you found bits of the fic sexy :)

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stripedpetunia May 12 2008, 03:57:13 UTC
Mostly especially Sakura baiting Sasuke. *cough*

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fahye May 12 2008, 04:04:33 UTC
Hee! I never read SasuSaku fic because I can't really stand the pairing, which is probably why this fic turned out so long: I had to write myself into submisson with judicious application of Naruto.

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aubreywitch May 12 2008, 04:03:16 UTC
Ahhh, absolutely loved it. Deliciously written, so many clever observations and heartfelt emotions. And good Sasu/Naru/Saku is such a hard find. This one shot makes me want to write again. XD

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fahye May 12 2008, 04:05:42 UTC
Oh, fantastic, I always love to hear that I've made someone else's writing muscles twitch! Thanks so much :)

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aubreywitch May 12 2008, 04:06:26 UTC
Oooh just saw you were an rper. Who do you play? ^______^

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fahye May 12 2008, 04:10:10 UTC
I don't do a lot of RP any more because med school ATE MY LIFE -- I used to play Lucifer at milliways_bar, and I have a couple of OCs in tiny original RPs. I really like playing, but a combination of uni work + inconvenient timezones (I'm in Australia) make it nigh on impossible these days.

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