That trapped place, between feeling and desire.

[faerie_spark]

Comments

[i_will_not_say]

Ooh, I liked this!

[faerie_spark]

I'm so glad!

[eternal_ot]

Whew! really..now that's a different take!

[faerie_spark]

I think that "whew" means I did my job here correctly. :) Thank you for reading.

[eternal_ot]

Absolutely..that's exactly what it meant..:) you are welcome!

[catwomon]

I truly am speechless after reading this one!

[faerie_spark]

Is that a good thing?

[whipchick]

This is so honest and vulnerable, both in the writing and in the actual story. And I love how it's simultaneously erotica and also about negotiation within a relationship. I like my porn to show character growth :)

[faerie_spark]

Thanks for the detailed feedback. I too like erotic material to have multiple dimensions, and I'm actually thinking that I could flesh this out even more. If you feel so inclined, I'd love some con crit to help me do that.

[minikin]

Oh, this is exquisite. Thank you. well done. yum.