Oh, this fic is so horribly written. :(

Oct 23, 2006 20:10

Heh, this is just bad fic, I tell you. :D But maybe someone out there will like it, so I'm posting!

Title: Homeless
Author: faelinn
Rating: PG
Warnings: Sexual references....maybe a few S2 spoilers, but not really.
Pairing: House/Chase
Disclaimer: They’re not mine.
Summary/Author’s Note: House discovers that Chase is living in his car. (Yeah, I know, ( Read more... )

fic, house/chase, house

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anonymous October 23 2006, 20:38:16 UTC
Where IS the money going?

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owleyes_arisen October 23 2006, 20:39:11 UTC
Sorry, that was me. Forgot to log in.

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faelinn October 23 2006, 21:44:03 UTC
Hee, I really wish I knew the answer to that! I figured if I came up with some off-the-wall idea, then this fic wouldn't make sense when the writers/producers finally decide to tell us more. :D

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faelinn October 23 2006, 21:46:20 UTC
That question definitely needs to be answered!

[OMG, MARY SUE CHILDREN?!!! That's wrong. Wrong, I say. *has a deep dislike of anything child-related* I'm with you on the Rowan strain of thought!]

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faelinn October 23 2006, 23:53:40 UTC
All children scare me deeply, but Mary Sue children are definitely the worst type! :D

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sagga_bott October 23 2006, 21:42:54 UTC
While I am curious about the money (just because I'm curious about things like that and won't sleep well until I have an answer) I'm more interested in the interaction between House and Chase. (I love them so much it's pathetic.)

And it was NOT horribly written! I really liked it! The dialogue is concise and in-character and the thoughts behind the dialogue are just twisted and depressing enough to fit homeless!Chase in this story!

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faelinn October 23 2006, 21:49:35 UTC
Yeah, I was definitely more interested in the interactions as well, so I figured I'd leave the big questions/answers up to other people. :D

Aww, thank you! *blushes* I'm just so nervous about everything I've written recently 'cause I've gone through this huge period of being unable to write anything. 'Twas terrible.

I'm really so glad you liked the fic! It's so nice to know the dialogue and such all worked out okay. *relieved* Thank you! :)

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sleepyheathen October 23 2006, 22:06:03 UTC
this is perfection.
and where exactly all of roberts money has gone to is a long and sordid tale for another day.
so sad and real and *hugs you*

i actually know a guy who lives in his car, he manages to keep it incredibly neat and tidy...also, unlike chase, he's a super tall man and in his sixties.

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faelinn October 23 2006, 22:28:14 UTC
AWWW! You're way too nice. You know that, right? :) *hugs*

And, WOW. He really lives in his car? I'd think that'd be very difficult to do.... Heh, but so awesome. :D

Thank you for reading! I'm really glad you liked it.

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sleepyheathen October 23 2006, 22:44:45 UTC
yup, and we live in an area that has below freezing weather, like, eight months of the year. he's a pretty tenacious bloke, is all i can figure.

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faelinn October 23 2006, 22:50:29 UTC
O_O That's crazy! I could never do that. Nope, never. But I guess cold weather would be better than hot. :D

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falloh8 October 23 2006, 22:18:18 UTC
I *love* this for the prompt. Oh, my god, I love this so hard.
I thought you wrote House and Chase perfectly- especially in the dialoge.
~I~ am very curious about Chase's money issues in the show, but I like what you did in the fic- leaving it open ended. I'd like to think it was a personal thing, to mirror House's excuse for having Chase stay with him. If Kayla's family hadn't already gotten money in the settlement, I'd like to think maybe it went there. :D

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faelinn October 23 2006, 22:34:36 UTC
You know, you always make me feel so much better about the odd stuff I post! Thank you. :) I've really been debating about posting this, so, yeah, I've been worrying. :D *much less stressed now*

I really can't wait to see what they're going to do with Chase's whole thing! I mean, they'll have to address it somehow, right? 'Course, the way they're ignoring Chase in favor of Cameron...who knows?

Yeah, I'm actually glad I left it open-ended. It really bothers me when something in the actual show contradicts something I've already written, so I figured it'd be best if I left it up to the reader. (Is the next new episode next Tuesday? *forgetful*)

YOU NEED TO WRITE FIC! *begs*

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