Mercy Me - Chapter Two | Did I Do It Right?

Oct 04, 2009 22:53


(This is a sequel to the story God Bless Catastrophe - we recommend you read that first.)

Read more... )

sequel: mercy me, chaptered story

Leave a comment

Comments 11

(The comment has been removed)

fae_dreamdance October 5 2009, 23:03:08 UTC
We sort of like it too because it keeps us going. :D We never stop--its like we have chapter one written and as I post chapter one, Mandy is writing up the beginnings of chapter two. Its an assembly line for us that we just crank out. We too love how fast it goes just because we don't like being bored waiting around for us to write the next chapter.

We actually hate the days when we don't get a chapter done--we bitch about it great length until we can sit down and actually do it. :D

Not lame! You came and commented at all--therefore not, not, NOT lame. :D I'm glad you're excited and I'm glad you liked what happened here. :D Though we would not have minded the slew of random numbers and letters that were pressed when your head smacked against the keyboard. That way we would have been flattered and laughing. :P

Thank you again for commenting and even more so for reading at all. :D

-J

Reply


maunetjeret October 5 2009, 03:46:43 UTC
*Happy dance* And they're out! This is gonna get good! As you can see, I'm excited. I mean, now I don't -only- have Tora and Saga love to look forward to, but also some Nao and Ash when I'm denied my fix. Poor Payton, though, I know he wants to protect Hiroto and all, but he'd just be a hindrance to plot development. Now let's see what the future has in store for Team Rainbow and the Lionel Bros.

Reply

fae_dreamdance October 5 2009, 22:59:36 UTC
We can see indeed!! :D And we're stoked about it--your excitement makes us even more excited than we already are. Hopefully it doesn't all build up on us and explode. I'm thinking it won't. ^_^ Keep being excited and we'll keep being excited too. :D ( ... )

Reply


luminous_vibe October 5 2009, 07:18:07 UTC
Now I'm all excited. I want to know what's going on with everyone else really bad. Not that Hiroto isn't important but I keep thinking "holy crap, what are they all going to say about this and that etc." I've been guessing what they're going to say but we all know how good I am at that...

Nao is out of the hospital now right? Or is he just being released soon? And I can't wait for more from Payton. He's a fixation for me now, I really want to know what's going on with him.

So, ya, great chapter. It raises questions for me and I like questions. They're entertaining. Can't wait to see where the story goes. ^.^

Reply

fae_dreamdance October 5 2009, 22:50:13 UTC
No! Guess away. Please do. :D We love that--we loved that in GBC, you were guessing and making conclusions and predictions. We want you to do the same here--it means we've done something right if it makes you excited to see the end and to see the people themselves.

I know what's going on with them but I cheat. :D Just a little :D

Nao is a matter you shall see in due time. :D We actually did not expect to hear that sort of comment about Payton to come up--don't get me wrong, we are GLAD to hear it. :D I know Mandy is and I'm like wiggly-happy in my chair. :D But the fact that you have him on the brain too is good. :D Its weird for us to hear that our original characters, that we've written for so long, are a fixation for anyone. They are for us--but never in a million years did we expect them to be for anyone else. :D So yay!!

Thank you for commenting and reading. :D We totally look forward to all of the things you say--they make us smile. :D Thank you!!

-J

Reply


vampiremilly October 5 2009, 22:25:38 UTC
yay! chapter two nya!!

ok, first off, this was awesome! i was like having some form of spaztic seizure when this popped up on my screen.(overly excited. ehehehe. >_>''''')

second, Hiroto's out! this is wonderful!! but i got a little confused. where did they go? (or is that not specified. i'm sorry!! ;o;''') aside from that, i can't wait for the next one! you two are awesome! ^_^

Reply

fae_dreamdance October 5 2009, 22:46:22 UTC
Yay! Oh man that is exciting that we made you have a spastic seizure. Perhaps not the first thing people consider good but we do. :D The more excited the people reading are, the more excited we are. :D So that made us ECSTATIC!!

We'll try our best to keep that happening. :D

Hiroto is out and don't be sorry. :D You'll find out more about it in Chapter Three. :D All that's known right now is that its somewhere familiar and its somewhere that Shiki and Ash know of--and Ono for that matter. Those things might not help but just the fact that Shiki is there might. :D Afterall, if Hiroto really is crazy then what the hell is he doing there?! :D

Thank you thank you thank you!! Thank you so much for coming, we are glad to see your comment and for reading. :D You're so sweet to us and we appreciate it greatly. :D

-J&M

Reply


(The comment has been removed)

fae_dreamdance October 17 2009, 01:58:43 UTC
You are forgiven--though none of your comments were weird. They were amazing--we freaking adored them. :D !!!

I do, however, worry I have gotten progressively more excited and talkative in the responses--tell me to shut the fuck up if I talk to much, okay? :D

I still wonder that--was it for the best? What would happen had he not gotten out? First off, part two would be very boring. :D Since the story is written sort of through Hiroto's POV, even if the other band members are UBERLY important to the story too. :D

It would be cool, I suppose, just harder to do magic in--it'd be a story suddenly about Hiroto whining in a mental hospital. :D That might get old. :D

Thanks again!! Yay!!

-J

Reply

fae_dreamdance October 17 2009, 02:00:50 UTC
Plus...we write half this shit when we are seriously sleep deprived. We lose hours of sleep--HOURS AND HOURS--just to write it. I don't think either one of us have slept more than four hours a night in the last week and yes...it is because we stay up way too late finishing a chapter to post it.

So we get it. :D

-J

Reply


Leave a comment

Up