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It's Not That Far Away - Chapter Seven (PART ONE) | These Cuts Run Deep

Nov 19, 2009 20:32

(This is a sequel to Mercy Me - We suggest you read that first.)

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national novel writing month - 2009, tora/saga, writing, chaptered story, sequel: it's not that far away

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maunetjeret November 20 2009, 02:07:03 UTC

God, I loved this chapter. I am still not feeling well *huge pout*, so this will be brief, not that it ever isn't... Well, sometimes I can ramble. Heh. I loved seeing Shiro alive and well and for a moment there when he said that Hiroto had created their environment I was like, "No shit. Pon is a changeling." But then I guess not.
I am glad Tora has finally demystified vampires... They aren't pretty, as intriguing as they might be. Or maybe I should say I'm glad he finally admitted to his mistake since I don't think he ever thought them to be pretty to begin with. I'm glad he asked for forgiveness and I can understand Shou's reaction to that. I really liked Shou in this chapter. His fighting spirit came to life, you know.
As always, thankyousosomuchforToraxSaga. Heh, it makes my day a whole lot better, it does. *Nods*
So this turned out not very brief at all, considering...

fae_dreamdance November 21 2009, 07:37:56 UTC

Bare with me dude--it is 2:30AM. So I apologize in advance for typos--they are very likely to happen. Hopefully it doesn't completely destroy the meaning of this comment. :D ( ... )

luminous_vibe November 20 2009, 03:02:39 UTC

“It’s still a bird, Bob-san.”I squealed really loud when I read that line, I was SO excited for Shiro not being dead. I really like how he just thinks of finding Shou and Tora and Saga as an adventure instead of being all serious. I like that his character is like that I guess I should say. He’s very fun and carefree and I love that. And I love that Hiroto was thinking of him as kinda a little insane. It’s like the perfect description of him ^.^ Also when he calls Hiroto Bob-san I still giggle a lot. I have no idea why but that’s so awesomely funny to me ( ... )

maunetjeret November 20 2009, 04:33:24 UTC

Why are your comments always so fucking great? I always come back just to read them. *Grins*

I thought the visual of Tora protecting Saga was pure win.

luminous_vibe November 20 2009, 04:45:14 UTC

Because I'm a little bit insane? *nods* That must be it. Glad to hear I entertained someone other than myself with that thought though ^.^

maunetjeret November 20 2009, 04:46:47 UTC

Like Shiro!

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fae_dreamdance November 21 2009, 07:55:07 UTC

Well dude we apologize for making you sleep deprived from work--though we totally take it as a compliment that you stayed up to read. Especially after a show. ^_^

What a nasty visual to go to bed with too--I love ti. ^_^

Thanks too! I think if Tora wasn't bound to the chair, he might have. Alternative ending to chapter seven, part one includes Tora kicking vampire ass, yes? Perhaps. :P

We're very very glad you liked this chapter. ^_^!!

-J