That first part of your comment is my favorite part. :D Ha--it makes me smile so much. :D
We're happy too--light in the darkness, you know? Though have we ever left them in light for too long? This chapter probably answers that question pretty well. :D With a loud and emphasized "fuck no"
The issue of Shou/Pon is coming. :D We haven't forgotten about those two--along with all sorts of darkness and light too. :D We have a lot--A LOT--in store for all five of these guys. :D
Thank you thank you. :D For reading, for commenting, for loving it--for freaking sticking with us. :D When we started this whole A9 fanfiction deal, we seriously didn't expect anyone to read at all--we figured it would be something we did to entertain each other for a while before some shiny ball would attract our attention elsewhere. Never did we think people would LIKE what we wrote. :D
It makes this so very unreal for us and its like a twilight state we are both stuck in--its amazing. :D So thank you!!! :D
This chapter was great. It started off so merrily and ended leaving a feeling of dread. If it gets much worse than this for Nao, I don't want to see it! Well, that's not true... I did really like Ash taking care of Nao. It was sweet, but above all, I -loved- his repeated hand washing. I am so looking forward to NaoxAsh that I completely forgot Shou and Pon... Bad Mau! We'll see how that goes, ne?
The thing we love the most is that you hit on everything we wanted to portray. The progression from a sort of warmth light to dark despair is EXACTLY what you saw and that is great. :D It makes us so happy. :D
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You do not disappoint. At all. This story is awesome man!!
Chapter 1 made me shiver at the thought of asylums. Payton’s attitude is convincing; no wonder Hiroto keeps repeating “I’m not crazy!!” Even a normal person (like Pon, perhaps) would go crazy in an asylum. You’re bound to, if you’re persistently persuaded that all your thoughts are delusions. Scary! Poor Pon. At least he’s out of there now. :D
There’s not much action as of yet, but I can feel it building up. Excited~
And I like the interaction between Ash and Nao. :”> Their relationship is really interesting. (And in my eyes, cute too. XD)
Mandy texted me while I was in class about your comment. :D Ha--she was so excited about it. :D We really love anyone who takes the time to read our stuff and to comment on it so usually we talk in great--GREAT--length about each of them. Most of the time its just us in awe that anyone would take that sort of time. :D
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I think it’s something writers in general feel - great excitement when someone reads and takes the time to comment stuff. I love comments myself; they make me very happy, so I do try comment if something sparks my interest. :D
Multi-faceted! Exactly. I did think of using that word but forgot to. *facepalm* But yes, it is indeed an interesting subject - the dark (and confused) side of the human mind.
Trust me, they really are cute! Don’t worry, just keep expanding on their relationship. XD
This smiley (:”>) is sort of like… blushing. I abuse smileys, so you might see more weird ones from me. Hoho. XD
Absolutely. Yes, it means a great deal. As fellow writers (and readers) we understand. Particularly because we appreciate your work as well; when admiration and respect is added into the mix it also mean something. We too try and comment on all things we find appreciation for. Fortunately for us we share it and it makes for interesting topics as we don't always agree on everything - though we do on most
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this chapter was so sweet at the beginning, with the happy little reunion! ^_^. it gets so exciting whenever stuff like this happens! (sorry nao, but this was awesome!) i couldn't sit still! just wondering, 'what's gunna happen? omg!' this is truly getting very very VERY interesting! i do hope Nao-san will be ok! ^_^
!!!! Do you know how much you made our day? Seriously. :D that was an exciting comment to see. You are so nice to us. :D We are so glad you came back--we're glad this story has interest for you and that it keeps you hooked. :D That means the WORLD to us.
We feel bad for being so mean to Nao-san--we love him. :D He's so adorable and so sweet and so silly that it kills us to put him in pain. :( Poor Nao. BUT!! Yay cute moments. :D We like the idea of light in the darkness--that certainly was one aspect there. We sort of expect to see a lot of that happening in this segment of the over all story (that is in Mercy Me). :D
The more we keep you from sitting still, the better. :D That is an amazing compliment to us. :D Thank you for saying all of those amazing things you said (just the fact that you were THAT into it makes us smiley!!) and more than anything else, thanks for reading. :D
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We're happy too--light in the darkness, you know? Though have we ever left them in light for too long? This chapter probably answers that question pretty well. :D With a loud and emphasized "fuck no"
The issue of Shou/Pon is coming. :D We haven't forgotten about those two--along with all sorts of darkness and light too. :D We have a lot--A LOT--in store for all five of these guys. :D
Thank you thank you. :D For reading, for commenting, for loving it--for freaking sticking with us. :D When we started this whole A9 fanfiction deal, we seriously didn't expect anyone to read at all--we figured it would be something we did to entertain each other for a while before some shiny ball would attract our attention elsewhere. Never did we think people would LIKE what we wrote. :D
It makes this so very unreal for us and its like a twilight state we are both stuck in--its amazing. :D So thank you!!! :D
-J
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You do not disappoint. At all. This story is awesome man!!
Chapter 1 made me shiver at the thought of asylums. Payton’s attitude is convincing; no wonder Hiroto keeps repeating “I’m not crazy!!” Even a normal person (like Pon, perhaps) would go crazy in an asylum. You’re bound to, if you’re persistently persuaded that all your thoughts are delusions. Scary! Poor Pon. At least he’s out of there now. :D
There’s not much action as of yet, but I can feel it building up. Excited~
And I like the interaction between Ash and Nao. :”> Their relationship is really interesting. (And in my eyes, cute too. XD)
I’m looking forward to the next chapters. :D
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Multi-faceted! Exactly. I did think of using that word but forgot to. *facepalm* But yes, it is indeed an interesting subject - the dark (and confused) side of the human mind.
Trust me, they really are cute! Don’t worry, just keep expanding on their relationship. XD
This smiley (:”>) is sort of like… blushing. I abuse smileys, so you might see more weird ones from me. Hoho. XD
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this chapter was so sweet at the beginning, with the happy little reunion! ^_^. it gets so exciting whenever stuff like this happens! (sorry nao, but this was awesome!) i couldn't sit still! just wondering, 'what's gunna happen? omg!' this is truly getting very very VERY interesting! i do hope Nao-san will be ok! ^_^
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We feel bad for being so mean to Nao-san--we love him. :D He's so adorable and so sweet and so silly that it kills us to put him in pain. :( Poor Nao. BUT!! Yay cute moments. :D We like the idea of light in the darkness--that certainly was one aspect there. We sort of expect to see a lot of that happening in this segment of the over all story (that is in Mercy Me). :D
The more we keep you from sitting still, the better. :D That is an amazing compliment to us. :D Thank you for saying all of those amazing things you said (just the fact that you were THAT into it makes us smiley!!) and more than anything else, thanks for reading. :D
-J&M
PS-Look how cute. :D
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