Spinning In Circles With Riddles And Rhyme

Jul 15, 2011 21:36

Title: Spinning in Circles With Riddles and Rhyme
Fandom: X-Men, First Class era
Summary: Raven, Erik, and Charles, the night before Cuba.
Rating: PG, I think
Pairings: References to Raven/Hank and aborted Raven/Erik, implied Erik/Charles
A/N: Technically canon-compliant, but in my head this is a mini-prologue to my in-progress X-Men Big Bang fic, ' ( Read more... )

x-men, twist 'verse, fanfiction

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wattle_neurotic July 17 2011, 12:49:01 UTC
Oh gosh I loved this ♥ especially Raven's part :)

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fae_boleyn July 18 2011, 01:46:14 UTC
Thank you, so glad you enjoyed it!

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fae_boleyn July 22 2011, 01:57:04 UTC
I think Charles and Raven's relationship is very familial in that way; our family often does not understand us, and even though they love us, that lack of understanding can be damaging. I think I need to address that in "These Twists and Turns of Fate" though I'm debating how to do it, exactly.

Erik is not sentimental, so his mindset isn't really either. He's the practical one.

I'm always open to concrit. :D Drop me a line about it whenever.

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der_jemand July 21 2011, 07:43:17 UTC
This is a great fic and a perfect prologue, because now I'm really looking forward to everything that's about to come. :)
Raven's part is just wonderful and yes, much love for "Recent events have changed that.". I love simple, 'matter of fact' lines that say so much about the character's feelings. ♥

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fae_boleyn July 22 2011, 01:55:02 UTC
Thanks! I'm enjoying writing it, so I hope it's a good read.

Erik is the matter of fact sort, I think.

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