Lost Inside A Foolish Disguise, Chapter Two

[fae_boleyn]

Fic Title: Lost Inside A Foolish Disguise
Chapter Title: All The Thoughts Lead Back To You
Fandom: Axis Powers Hetalia
Pairings/Characters: England/America, Scotland/Ireland, side Prussia/Canada, Northern Ireland, Wales
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Sick of watching their oblivious loved ones suffer, Northern Ireland and Canada plot to matchmake England and

Comments

[ren_chan146]

How awesome is that?XD I can't wait to see what will happen next. This stor is going to be really good.

[fae_boleyn]

Thank you, I hope your prediction turns out to be right. :)

I'll try to have the next chapter up in a timely fashion. I do know we will be at the British-Irish Council, and finally we'll meet Cornwall (and he's probably not going to be the only one).

[captainladyace]

Oh my, Wales should have demanded longer than simply a year!

Great read, it was a lot of fun!

[fae_boleyn]

He probably should have, yes. But Wales also likes to make realistic demands, and North and Sealand... probably wouldn't have left him alone much longer than that. Especially since Sealand can - truthfully - argue that he never agreed to anything. :)

(Is your icon a fem!America, or is it just the angle?)

[captainladyace]

Yep, she is!

And yeah, definately right about the Sealand thing... one of my favorite little details about the fic so far is that not everyone knows everyone else's human name. It's really annoying when countries that have absolutely no interaction automatically know them.

Also, I really liked all the introspection in the chapter.

[xolavander]

Please update? I am so excited to see the next chapter.
So much, that I think I cannot handle myself anymore!

[fae_boleyn]

I'm working on it, I promise! Unfortunately, a closer look at the British-Irish Council revealed that there are three other personifications I need to invent. They probably won't appear beyond this chapter, but I do want to give them a little thought.

[xolavander]

Alright then. I will cheer for you! ♥

[nekoian]

I read both chapters and I love where it's going. North and Canada make great scheming buddies and everyone is characterised so well.

Love seeing Wales in there too, and the inclusion of Cornwall in everything makes me cheerful!

Looking forward to seeing chapter three!

[fae_boleyn]

Thanks!

I love Wales. I might have to do a little more with him in this fic. (Possibly involving a certain pairing we discussed.) As for Cornwall, he exists largely because once I made Ireland a girl, I needed another character to give England three older brothers, as in canon.

Chapter three got bogged down - Channel Islands, I had to invent their -tans.

[nekoian]

I do rather love your Wales, he seems long suffering but adaptable. Seeing a Wales paired up with Austria would make me giddy, just because I was sure nobody else would ever do it!

Hehe, I fear I simply tend to ignore canon. But my Ireland is a man, and I listed Cornwall as being England's younger brother.

I worked a little on the Channel Islands myself, and ended up just expanding right the way out, from Faroe, Isle of Man to Jersey, Guernsey and Brittany. And I have barely used a single one. I'm looking forward to seeing your Channel Isles, I'm not sure I'm hitting the right note with mine, so it'll be an education.

[fae_boleyn]

Long-suffering but adaptable... Yeah, probably a good description. I think I have an idea on how to do some stuff with him, so we'll see how it plays out.

Ireland walked into my head as a girl, and thus she has stayed. (Parallel universe theory, we're both right, and I wonder what our Irelands would make of each other.)

I have Mann, Jersey, Guernsey, and Brittany, though Brittany is France's sister and only a cousin to the UK sibs. They're all girls - yes, even Mann, I found it a bit ironic. Besides, Hetalia needs more females.