Comments | fading_spark: green is the colour of envy, envy fills my soul - claire/locke

fading_spark

green is the colour of envy, envy fills my soul - claire/locke - pg

Oct 04, 2006 15:41

Title: Green is the colour of envy, envy fills my soul
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fanfic, coake, claire, locke, lost

Comments 16

made_in_ink October 4 2006, 12:32:25 UTC

I know you said you didn't like it but I absolutely adore it! I like the awkwardness between them at first which is changed by three simple words that could have made the situation even more awkward. Its so sweet and so completely Locke and Claire.

You nailed your prompt, chickadee! Its fab. :)

fading_spark October 4 2006, 20:17:12 UTC

Thank you so much hon, that means alot. *hug* For me, it was a real pain to write and it took so long because I felt really uninspired so by the time I was done, I hated it. I'm glad worked out well though. :)

made_in_ink October 4 2006, 20:23:31 UTC

I totally know what you mean. I'm like that with my uber-long Alex/Goodwin fic. I'm sick of the sight of it right now. Its soo long, it kinda took a life of its own. I quite liked it when i started writing it but now I'm typing it all up all I can see are its flaws. Its totally starting to piss me off.

The length it is also means I will have to put it out in chapters. Which means possibly spamming my friends page in one day or drawing it out over the course of a week or so posting an installment a day.

Its stupid little things like that that are making me doubt the whole thing y'know.

fading_spark October 4 2006, 20:31:47 UTC

Yeah I totally understand that. Although I can't wait to read your Alex/Goodwin story hon, hee.

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katje0711 October 4 2006, 16:50:23 UTC

Very nice. Thanks so much. I really liked the last bit, when Claire told Locke she missed him. Awwww.

fading_spark October 4 2006, 20:13:15 UTC

Thanks. Glad you liked it.

gracent_dic October 4 2006, 17:01:31 UTC

Aww, why don't you like it? I think it was adorable. I loved it.

fading_spark October 4 2006, 20:12:54 UTC

Thanks hon. But it just took so long to write that it was pissing me off by the time it was done, lol. So me no like-y.

tinkerbell99 October 4 2006, 21:31:43 UTC

I know you didn't like it, but I did. There's something about it that has a really calming effect. I'm not sure how else to describe it except an "everything's going to be okay" feeling at the end. I kind of needed that just now. Lovely!

fading_spark October 4 2006, 21:34:36 UTC

Thanks hon. :) I'm really glad you liked it.

lostdreamer56 October 4 2006, 22:25:42 UTC

It was still very good despite your misgivings. I really loved the ending; it was sweet and simple and just perfect for this pairing. Awww.. cute!

And less than three hours until Goodwin and Christian/Sarah!!!! :D

fading_spark October 4 2006, 22:28:16 UTC

Thanks hon, I'm glad the ending was good! :D

YAY! I can't wait for the Goodwin and Christian/Sarah-ness! *squee*