glass slippers - peyton sawyer - one tree hill - fanfiction

[fading_spark]

Title: glass slippers
Rating: PG
Fandom: One Tree Hill
Pairing: none
Word Count: 100
Spoilers: 3x13.
Note: Written for the first round of drabbles at pretty_stickers. Prompt was "cold".
Note2: I don't really like Peyton, and I kinda thought this scene was horrifically acted, but it's still sad in it's rawest essence. For those who don't know, Peyton's birth

Comments

[bluesunsets]

God, this scene made me want to cry. Just the situation seems so ... urgh. Hillbilly probably wasn't the best person to have do this scene; shove Katie Heigl in there (another blonde) and you'd see me bawling.

This is beautiful! I pictured Brooke in Peyton's position, tbh, and ... gah. The strings attached to my heart ache.

A flash of ice cold creeps through her bones and she tumbles to the floor like a withering ballerina. is a BEAUTIFUL ending line. It's so gorgeous, and it ties in the title (really random) and ... it's just gorgeous imagery.

You made me like Peyton ... or feel sorry for her. This was just beautiful, babe. Be proud. =)

♥

[fading_spark]

Thank you hon, I'm sooo glad you liked it. That last line was the hardest to write, I had a few different ideas but I think that was the best. As for the title - it was really random, but I thought it sounded pretty, lol. Anyway, thanks, glad you liked it.

[bluesunsets]

Dude, the last line gave Peyton grace. You should be proud. (+ mems, btw. It's a gorgeous little piece.) ♥

[fading_spark]

Mmm, it was okay - no need to exaggerate on my behalf dude. Glad you liked it though.

[lostdreamer56]

Wow! Very, very, very well written. Oh, and gorgeous and amazing. And I really have no idea of these characters, but that doesn't really matter because you're awesome.

*hug*

[fading_spark]

Thank you very much hon, I'm glad you liked it. :)