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the innocent games we play - brooke, james - one tree hill - fanfiction

Jun 20, 2007 23:08

Title: the innocent games we play
Rating: PG
Fandom: One Tree Hill
Pairing: hints of Naley (Nathan/Haley)
Word Count: 444
Spoilers: 4x21.
Note: Written for round three at pretty_stickers. Dice #3.
Note2: This is really lame, but I needed to write something for pretty_stickers. Wish I had more inspiration, but alas, my muse escapes me. Damn muse!
Originally Posted: 20th June ( Read more... )

- one tree hill, ch: james scott, !fanfiction, ch: brooke davis, *pg

Comments 7

bluediamond421 June 20 2007, 17:02:00 UTC

Awwww, that was so adorable! I hope in the four-years-later s5 that we get to see something like this.

fading_spark June 21 2007, 00:02:11 UTC

Thanks, I hope we do too. :D

lostdreamer56 June 20 2007, 20:56:08 UTC

Cute! You write fluff adorably well, and this is cute! (Even though I have no idea who anyone is ;))

fading_spark June 21 2007, 00:04:22 UTC

Haha, thanks. (I still have no idea where my angst bone went)

bluesunsets June 21 2007, 01:33:41 UTC

HOW DARE YOU THINK THIS IS "REALLY LAME". IT IS NOT! IT IS SOOOOOO CUTE IT MAKES ME WANNA GRAB MY TEDDY BEAR AND PLAY MONOPOLY (because I dunno what that game is lol).

This fic surprised me; I thought it'd be around season four, and Naley's kid is just learning to walk sort of thing. I LOVE how it's Godmother vs. Godson in a game ten years later. Very cute, original, and NOT LAME! =P

“I can’t believe I’m being beaten at Chutes and Ladders by a ten year old,” Brooke groaned, glaring at the ten year old in question who was poking his tongue out at his godmother.

Awww. So Brooke there. And I love how cheeky James is. Ooo. He's SO like his dad! I think this is really cute; it suggests Brooke isn't letting the ten year old beat her. Poor Brooke, though - she's losing against a ten year old. That's kind of sad. =P

“I get lots of practice. Dad said I have to make the family proud,” little James Scott said, puffing out his chest and grinning toothily.LOL! Awww; Nate, please, don't turn out like your father. That sounds like Nate, though; ( ... )

fading_spark June 21 2007, 01:48:57 UTC

It is lame. Srsly. LAAAAAAME. The game is "Snakes and Ladders", but I'm sure I've heard those darn Americans call it "Chutes and Ladders" or whatever, so I just called it that.

Anyway, I wanted it set forward like wooooah cos originally I was gonna have Brooke preggers with a Brucas baby, but I couldn't get it to work. Writing a ten year old is easier than writing a four year old (which is how old he'll be in s5).

Hahaha, well Brooke isn't really a board games sorta gal. ;) Dude, James is gonna be a mini!Nathan to the N-A-T-H-A-N - without the asshole stage. He'll always be nice like his mommy, and he'll be super!smart. hee

LOL! Awww; Nate, please, don't turn out like your father. That sounds like Nate, though; I can see him telling James to make the family proud and ruffling his hair while he says it. That's just SO cute!

Nathan would totally do that, wouldn't he? Even over a board game. Let's just hope Nathan doesn't get too psycho about "making him proud". ;)

Oooo. Did Nate and Brooke have a bit of Brathan happen over this ( ... )

bluesunsets June 27 2007, 04:39:05 UTC

IT ISN'T LAME. DO NOT MAKE ME RUN AFTER YOU WITH A KNIFE (Peter would be jealous)!!!

You did a fantastic job with this, hon. Don't you EVER doubt yourself. If you do, I'll write an essay as to why the world should explode every time you do. And my fingers will bleed for the essay will be filled with goodness and I would've been eager to type it.

I should hand in that as my essay for English about racism and junk. :p

SRSLY. This fic pwned my board games. PLEASE write some more James&Brooke. =) ILY. ♥