JUMP AU fic!

Oct 17, 2014 23:52

Well, for better or for worse (but honestly, I feel like it's better) I was actually inspired outside of needing to write for shiritori, and so now I bring you… a really weird fic. XD;;; Please read the notes before reading… and I hope it's enjoyable XD

title: もっとみてよ、みつめてよ [Look at me more, gaze at me]
rating: pg
pairing: Yaotome Hikaru/Inoo Kei
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idolverse, one-shot, hey! say! jump, bl

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britkit27 October 17 2014, 15:23:41 UTC
Aaaaaaah I already flailed at you in chat over this but I love this verse so much omg XD Things I did not know how badly I wanted till I had them

Just, just, all the little bits of akiba idoling and perpetually-in-shorts-Daiki and terrified Keito and Inoo's obsessive twitter checking and they're so cute together and trying and *~~~~~~*

And then of course Hikaru shows up and just blatantly ignores all the rules and Inoo is so indignant and then so touched when he was drawing him and sneaking in his phone number Hikaru you brat

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I love it *____* I need some happy HSJ icons gdi XD

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faded_lace October 19 2014, 04:43:57 UTC
I'm so glad XD I somehow feel the same way… things I didn't know how badly I wanted them until I thought of them.

I really love the mental image of their little idol group XD They'd be adorable together.

And ahahaha |D yup Inoo is so indignant.

I'm so glad that you liked this! Thank you for reading <3

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faded_lace October 19 2014, 04:27:55 UTC
Aww, yay! I'm really glad you like it! The concept is so weird I was afraid no one would read it XD;; But yeah |D;;; I thought it was fun to write them as nobody-idols rather than really famous ones XD; And I'm glad the end was a surprise! |D;;; Inoo will probably change his mind on the "ugly" front eventually, though… XD

Thanks for reading! I'm really glad you enjoyed it.

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yomimashou October 20 2014, 01:29:35 UTC
I really love this ♥ The premise is so perfect, and I really enjoyed your descriptions of their small-time idoling, the tiny theater and demachi and the costume variations to fit each of their characters and everything. And how even though it's not easy going, they really love what they do ♥

And omg creeper Hikaru taking photos without permission, it's so fitting XD I didn't see the ending coming at all--it's so perfect that he was taking the photos in order to draw Inoo, and I love how Inoo was touched despite himself. The end was really adorable ♥ I really enjoyed this and I love the premise so much! And I enjoyed picturing fanboy!Yuto and the rest of Jump there too while I was reading XD

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faded_lace October 20 2014, 06:20:51 UTC
I'm so glad you liked it! I really liked the premise myself, so I'm happy other people enjoyed it XD I feel like my description of Akiba must be really off since I don't know anything about small time idols, but… I'm glad it was an interesting read anyway.

And I'm glad the end came as a surprise! I was afraid it was obvious XD;; And omg yes |D;;; Sadly, fanboy Yuto didn't make i in here, but I'm glad you were picturing him |D;;;

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ma_rendezvous October 26 2014, 02:58:47 UTC
i love this. I really do. And I can't really describe how pretty you wrote the whole things. And I love how you describe Hikaru, with moustaches and all, I somehow think it suits him X3
And I feel like finding out the continuation of their story right now TwT
And how I miss Hikanoo so much. There's almost no Hikanoo fic anymore these days, so thank you very much! <3

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faded_lace October 26 2014, 04:23:06 UTC
Thank you! I'm really glad you enjoyed it! Since Hikaru never freaking shaves his face even as an idol, I figured if he was a regular person he'd probably grow a gross mustache |D;; I'm glad you thought it fit for him |D;

I really enjoyed writing this, so I hope I can write more, too. I'm glad more people love this pairing ♥ I love it a lot too, and it makes me sad how little there is.

Thanks for reading!

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ma_rendezvous November 4 2014, 06:43:29 UTC
you're welcome!
i know right? well Hikaru's cute (in a cool way) that way so yeah, it does suit him XD sometimes I thought about making fanfic where he had mustaches but never really happened. writing is hard duh.

being a hikanoo fan is hard right? wwwww ;;w;;

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faded_lace November 5 2014, 01:13:48 UTC
It is hard sometimes ahahaha. I'm really glad you liked the fic!

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au_gravityfree November 10 2014, 05:00:37 UTC
I love this <3

major debut wannabe Idol Inoo vs a creepy but cute illustrator Hikaru ohhhh
take a risk Inoo! please call Hikaru right away :)

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faded_lace November 11 2014, 00:29:03 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. ♥

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