private-only, back-to-posting, private-only... let's see how long this survives this time.

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Okay, well, screw it, here, fic. *drops and goes back into hiding* No idea what I did there. Or why. Or how. All I know it's damned angsty and I wish it weren't, all I hope is if this is only remotely in character, as far as it can be, some parts I *hope* are not. All I wonder is, What the fucking pink and glittery heck is this? Me, torturing

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[nadi_wamos]

IF YOU PRIVATE THIS, IMMA CRY.

The fans love him for that. "Villa!", they shout from the ranks.

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And because you want him, too, because Odysseus has long since defeated your days, you say yes (you say it with your lips, without uttering a sound, you say it with your fingers curling around his collar and accidentally - or deliberately - brushing the hairline on his neck) and there suddenly is something you had never dreamed of in your twenty, twenty-one youthful years: an affair. (Don’t say that word, it’s dirty, it is serious, it is heavy.)
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Maybe he was just introducing himself. (But he wasn’t, and this you know, too. It is a fine line, really.)

and everything else was complete love.
YOU are complete love. this is really good! :D you conveyed everything perfectly. :) *hugs*

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Thank you ;_; :D

[janierotten]

[a little too incoherent to properly comment now]

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so i take it you liked it, heh? XD ;)

[farfan]

hey!!! XDD
that's a pretty good story! you know, football's not my favourit sport. but the story..... ANGST!!!! I so missed your angsty stories!! *hearts* ^-^d

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*smacks you lightly* yeah, but SEE TEH LOVE, girl.
This pairing owns all others, don't you know that? :D
Gracias for liking.

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tehehe *rubs hands together* ;) 'fanks.

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such a strong embrace you know they're totally in love, si? (sex on the pitch, kthx!!!)

[oh_so_blase]

This pairing is clearly not written enough but this fic makes up for it. It kills.

I am completely loving your writing style and your descriptions. Not only that but the fact that you added the Trojan War made me like this even more. because, because Odysseus has long since defeated your days, you say yes (you say it with your lips, without uttering a sound, you say it with your fingers curling around his collar
beautiful.

I love how you explain their relationship and it seems so real. guh. i love it.

Maybe he was just introducing himself. (But he wasn’t, and this you know, too. It is a fine line, really.)
I pretty much died with this.

memories.

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I feel like keyboard smashing and emoticons abusing my reaction to your comment, but, trying to restrain myself: Thank you so, so, so much for liking it. Thank you.