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[facing_the_wind]

Title: Alice in Wonderland (creative, I know!)
Characters: Alice/Hatter, Charlie and Carolyn
One Shot
Rating: PG
Notes: I DO own Charlie and Carolyn! I do not own Alice and Hatter. And I don't own the very first sentence, I'm sorry to say. Lewis Carroll did that one all on his own, thanks. (OMG I JUST GOT IT!!! Alice's mom's name is Carol

Comments

[veritas_found]

I'm squealing here. I absolutely adore this - brilliant job, hun! :D

I love the differences in the stories (which we already knew, but I loved seeing 'em from the kids' eyes), and the whole family feel was nice. Just a little glimpse into a nightly ritual, so very domestic but still sweet.

Also, I loved this: He had his dad's dark eyes and they grew thoughtful more often than not. In him, Alice could easily see what his father might've been like as a child if only he'd been allowed to just be a kid instead of fighting for his very survival.

That was bittersweet 'n beautiful, hun. Excellent job on this all-around. <3

~ Ver

[facing_the_wind]

Thank you, what a sweet reply! I just started thinking about her holding the actual book at the end and wondering if it ever came up again.

As for Hatter, well you know he couldn't possibly have had a normal childhood. So I can definitely see him wanting to give his kids as close to one as possible.

Thank you again! :)

[whogeek]

Awwww!! So sweet and cute and adorable and funny! And I love the fact that Hatter tells their story to their kids.

[facing_the_wind]

Well he's sure not gonna let it die! ;) I think he'd be proud of it, really, and, as the kids say, it's much more exciting! I'm glad you liked it.

[head_o_rainbows]

Perfect

[facing_the_wind]

Thank you, I couldn't ask for better than this. :D

[klcthebookworm]

I adore this peek into their H.E.A. and Hatter being such a good dad.