If You Claimed To Love Me... - A Poem

[facesandmasks]

Title: If You Claimed To Love Me... - A Poem
Pairings: Yunjae
Rating: PG
Warnings: Instead of a fanfic, I wrote a poem.
Genre: Angst, Character Assasination
Summary: Jaejoong had enough of what's going on and had planned something. Expressed in Jaejoong's POV.

A/N: I chose not to have this edited as I wanted the poem to be left raw as it is.

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Comments

[facesandmasks]

Spot for krisooh and her mind boggling stories and ruro_junjin.

Any requests for spots? SAY it out.

[krisooh]

OH MY FUCKING ...

lkdsakdsakd;as AH, I'm so glad you gave me a spot &heart;
Honestly - honestly. I loved it. JUST loved it.

Everything - from the cheating to the stabbing to the depression to the hanging.
Everything made me go omg - omg!

*Why do I have a feeling it was Yunho who got stabbed?*

[facesandmasks]

Thank you so much! :hug:

Yes, it was Yunho who got stabbed since I wrote it from Jaejoong's POV.

Maybe you should promote this on your blog since you loved it? LOLOLOL

[krisooh]

Hugs you back*

Haha yeah, I had a mind set it was Yunho. Even though you didn't say who's POV is was. I could just picture JaeJoong losing it - and it was hot.

Haha, promote? Wow - I don't think I've ever pomoted anything bfore. Or have I? LOL
Nah - not in my blog. Because I never write there these days :0
But when I post another chap up! ♥

[facesandmasks]

You're welcome!

The emotions was so raw when I wrote this and honestly speaking, only after I wrote this at work did I feel better.

And I invite you to read my other one shots in this LJ if you have the time.

Thank you once again! =D

[haru_ran]

I'm so speechless hun ..... I really don't know what to say >/////<

all I feel is so different right now ...... I feel sorry for Jaejoong, being the cheated one that loves his Yunnie so much and yet he killed him for being cheated by him
but I also feel sorry for Yunnie, being stabbed by his love even when he cheated on him
I feel sad .... for both of them *at the brink of her tears*
but I know they will be together in death again ...... even when their memories ceased to exist ;_____;

I really like it hun
I never felt like this after a poem ....... so many different feelings *sighs*
it's really great

[facesandmasks]

Gosh. I'm so touched to hear that your feelings had gone in all directions after reading this.

But I do admit that the last 2 verses were oxymoronic since he's happy to join Yunho yet as he remembered the stabbing, all those had vanished, possibly out of anger.

[haru_ran]

yes, they really went in every possible direction @_____@
I was kinda confused through all these differences inside of my heart @//////@

aaaah~~ I see ...... hmmm~~ but is Jae still happy to see his Yunnie in death again?
I mean he still can be angry at him but I'm sure Yunho will too 'cause he stepped him ....... but I believe in both of them ... their love is strong enough ^____^

[facesandmasks]

If both are willing to forgive each other, I don't see any reason why they wouldn't be together even after death.

[gapo24]

Oh Dis is soo different! I love da poem thou! eventhou is angst but i do love it! How could Yunnie cheated Jae! Den Jae stabbed Yunho! aahhh!! end Jae was happy again cuz he will be w/Yunnie again! ahhhh! I love it thou!

[facesandmasks]

Thanks! Although the last 2 verses are oxymoronic since we're dealing with Jae who wants to be with Yunho in the afterlife yet still harbours the anger of being cheated upon.

[love_cassiopeia]

I'm speechless *_*

What a way to say so much in such brevity.

And I secretly plotted to kill you.
I actually thought this line was symbolic. So I was shocked when he actually jammed the knife into his back and called the police.

I loved it! Angst is my food. *is a masochist*

[facesandmasks]

Thanks!

When one's mental state isn't stable, the rawness of the emotions comes alive and the result is what I wrote.

I wrote it purely out of frustration and after re-reading this, I actually collapsed into tears for reasons I couldn't explain.