100quills entry: Outside.

[fabricatedemons]

Title: Happy Christmas.
Rating: G
Prompt Set: 100.1
Prompt: 096 Outside
Word Count: 1007
Summary: Lily goes walking down a familiar path on Christmas, meeting a familiar face.
Warnings: No warnings, this is pretty gen
Disclaimer: This is JK’s world, I merely play in it.

Comments

[randomneses]

Aw, that was really quite sad. Is this supposed to be post-SWM? If so I like how they were actually relatively civil with one another despite clear disappointment and disapproval on Lily's part.

So yeah, I really loved this ♥

[fabricatedemons]

I know...a bit too sad for Christmas, and yet, that's what came out when I sat down to write. It is, post SWM, btw. I imagine it being in the Christmas holiday of Lily's sixth year. They're estranged, yet he's no DE yet.

I'm glad you liked it. Merry Christmas, yeah? :)

[aaronlisa]

I really enjoyed this fic. It was very sad but very well written.

[fabricatedemons]

Thank you. I hadn't had it in mind to write something so melancholy, and yet this came out. Happy holidays!

[lieyourtruth]

I don't usually read too much Marauder's era fanfics, and definitely never read a Lily and Severus fic before. But I'm glad I followed the link on randomneses journal.

Your writing style is amazing and the sadness this short fic evokes is very heartfelt. Kudos on a well-written piece. I loved it. =)

[fabricatedemons]

Thanks so much! I appreciate you taking a moment to read and comment.

[lavinialavender]

Waaaaah, that's sad but good. It's hard for me to find their potential after the last scene seen in the memories, but you did a good job of it, and I almost see potential for a better reunification there as well. Thanks, though; it's a very nice scene.

[fabricatedemons]

Oh, you're welcome, and thank you for reading. I know what you mean, though -- I didn't have much hope after the last memory scene, either, but it's always fun to imagine what could've happened. I hadn't intended to write a sad piece, but that's came out. My inner OTP was emo at the time, I think. heh.

[matitablu]

Aww, so sad, but also so true. I can see this happening!

Merry belated Christmas, anyway!

[fabricatedemons]

Oh, good. I was hoping it seemed real. :) Thanks.

And Merry Christmas to you, as well!