Ah, yes. I was exercising Lily a bit in that part, and she was struggling between up and down quite a bit. Looks like I missed something. I'll have to go back and fix that. Thanks for letting me know. My beta hasn't returned it yet, so right now it's just me looking things over, and you know how it is once you've read something a dozen times...it reads how it's supposed to in your head. I've got wonky brain signals.
Florence is near and dear to my heart. She's going to really bloom in later chapters. And, of course, Rosier FTW!
Barty is another character I write about sometimes. He doesn't get as much recognition as he should. I liked thinking of him only bothering to learn the naughty words. And don't be jealous. You have plenty of original, lovely things in your fic.
Can't you see how Snape would just start liking Lily? She's less scary than Narcissa. There is a lot more to Eileen's letter than meets the eye, and Hogsmeade weekend is going to be fun to write! Yay.
My beta hasn't returned it yet, so right now it's just me looking things over, and you know how it is once you've read something a dozen times...it reads how it's supposed to in your head. I've got wonky brain signals.
Oh don't worry, I definately know how you feel.
And, of course, Rosier FTW!
Eee! There should be Rosier fan art or something...we can invent what he looks like >:D
And don't be jealous. You have plenty of original, lovely things in your fic.
Thanks :3
Can't you see how Snape would just start liking Lily?
Oh yes. I can definately see why. And I love the slow development of their fondness for one another.
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Ah, yes. I was exercising Lily a bit in that part, and she was struggling between up and down quite a bit. Looks like I missed something. I'll have to go back and fix that. Thanks for letting me know. My beta hasn't returned it yet, so right now it's just me looking things over, and you know how it is once you've read something a dozen times...it reads how it's supposed to in your head. I've got wonky brain signals.
Florence is near and dear to my heart. She's going to really bloom in later chapters. And, of course, Rosier FTW!
Barty is another character I write about sometimes. He doesn't get as much recognition as he should. I liked thinking of him only bothering to learn the naughty words. And don't be jealous. You have plenty of original, lovely things in your fic.
Can't you see how Snape would just start liking Lily? She's less scary than Narcissa. There is a lot more to Eileen's letter than meets the eye, and Hogsmeade weekend is going to be fun to write! Yay.
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Oh don't worry, I definately know how you feel.
And, of course, Rosier FTW!
Eee! There should be Rosier fan art or something...we can invent what he looks like >:D
And don't be jealous. You have plenty of original, lovely things in your fic.
Thanks :3
Can't you see how Snape would just start liking Lily?
Oh yes. I can definately see why. And I love the slow development of their fondness for one another.
*laugh* Now I'm worried about Eileen.
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