Green Lace Part 3

Jun 01, 2007 22:03

Title: Three for Tea
Series Title: Green lace
Author: FabledFigment
Disclaimer: Nothing here belongs to me.
Rating: R (For camping out in Jayne’s filthy mind)

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inara, weight bench, companionly advice, green lace, seduction

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On and On anonymous June 2 2007, 04:07:36 UTC
Man this keeps getting better and better. Hope theres more...

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silentpheonix June 2 2007, 06:48:50 UTC
Knitting is considered a religious experience?

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fabledfigment June 2 2007, 10:36:30 UTC
lol. Of course (if you're a knitter) I knit in church every week. *nods as if this justifies the previous statement*
Repetitive activities, including most craftwork can induce a sort of meditative trance. My mind doesn't shut down for meditation unless I either just woke up or I am doing something with my hands.
Organizing books works for me too. I used to unpack boxes/sort onto carts...
BTW, love the icon.

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crazywriterchic June 2 2007, 12:22:36 UTC
"I think what we need here is a matriarchal council.”

You have no idea how much I grinned when I read that. I like this a lot.

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fabledfigment June 2 2007, 12:32:54 UTC
It was kind of fun to watch Inara in shock. I think she was going to rip him a new one for pushing River around like that. Then he started in on why. lol.
*hugs big confued man*

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bookaddict43 June 3 2007, 11:16:15 UTC
I liked how River thought she was no good at the seduction business - but Jayne thought she was too good :)

I also enjoyed the fact that while Jayne was quite comfortable with the thought of a boy whore (no emotional linking), he wasn't too happy about an ordinary teenage boy!

I'm enjoying your series very much and hope to read more soon.

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fabledfigment June 3 2007, 16:42:36 UTC
Somehow this story has grown to be all about contrasts. Shifts in perspective.

The gruel is 'good stuff' then it is so bad he can barely swallow it.

Boy-whore verses boy, etc.

I'm glad you like it. I'm almost done with part four.

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romanceguru June 19 2007, 22:09:28 UTC
This was great! River’s mating dance and Jayne dragging River to Inara, telling on her like a child. And River’s reactions during the whole ordeal were hysterical!

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