Comments | fabledfigment: Green Lace Part 2

fabledfigment

Green Lace Part 2

May 30, 2007 00:12

Title: The Token ( Read more... )

cooking, green lace, prerayne, seduction

Comments 8

silentpheonix May 30 2007, 05:56:00 UTC

Silly Jayne, you could be having something much better for lunch. :D

Nice to see that you continued this. Is there going to be more?

fabledfigment May 30 2007, 06:12:11 UTC

Yes, there will be more. He gets more avoidy, then he does some stupid things, but I do so love a happy ending...

ceslas May 30 2007, 06:24:32 UTC

I like how you are playing with his discomfiture and his intrigue. And River-speak is very well artculated.

And the grey-water detail! Ruttin' fabulous and sooo much more accurate than the endless long showers many folks indulge their fantasies in. I am always happier when the details ring true even those seemingly unimportant ones. *Nods* Gives so much more texture to the richness of the 'verse.

fabledfigment May 30 2007, 06:48:45 UTC

So glad you like. Poor Jayne, he just doesn't believe she is serious.

The grey water/black water thing is mostly a chance to see Jayne nekkid. You notice? Yummy.

Plus I'm a bit of a SciFi geek. lol

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fabledfigment June 1 2007, 00:31:46 UTC

This was so not supposed to become a series, but it did anyway. Sigh.
I figure on three maybe four more segments. No real smut.

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fabledfigment June 2 2007, 02:37:04 UTC

Definitely.

Both at the same time, even. I think I have it contained now. Maybe. Unless one of them says something else...

Three more parts. I think, probably. Teh heh.

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romanceguru June 19 2007, 22:03:32 UTC

You need to stop dressing up Jayne in all these yummy situations (i.e. first sweaty, now shirtless)…or not. = p

“He groaned and reached for the scrap of lace. No getting over it, Doc’s little sister had gotten it into her crazy head to be a torturing dick tease.” *gigglesnort* Best inner-Jayne dialogue ever!