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Sloth prompt

May 26, 2007 23:31

Title: Green lace
Prompt: ‘Sloth’ for the Seven Deadly Sins challenge
Author: FabledFigment
Disclaimer: Nothing here belongs to me. (including the inspiration, thank you crazywriterchic)
Rating: R (For camping out in Jayne’s filthy mind)

Now that ‘When to pounce?’ is complete, I am busily procrastinating my longer fics by answering a challenge…

( To view lace, click here. )

weight bench, sloth, green lace, prerayne

Comments 12

silentpheonix May 27 2007, 06:24:31 UTC

Hmmm, yes, sweaty workout Jayne.

a_diva_88 May 27 2007, 06:25:29 UTC

Definitely loving Sweaty!Jayne. Nicely done!

bugchicklv May 27 2007, 07:19:19 UTC

I love your River-voice. And her comparing the animal to a bible verse is VERY much her.

Excellent job.

fabledfigment May 27 2007, 15:05:30 UTC

Thank you. that means a lot to me, because River can be devilishly difficult to write.
It seems like only a quarter of her train of thought ever actually gets vocalized.

crazywriterchic May 27 2007, 12:19:06 UTC

Woot! Now all my sins have been explored. I liked it immensely. Well done!

fabledfigment May 27 2007, 15:02:58 UTC

You are very much welcome. I love a good challenge.
I also love dirty/sweaty Jayne. (as long as he has bathed recently...)
River pretending to be a sloth was too 'her' to pass up. (technically she should have been hanging upside down, but oh well.)

ceslas May 27 2007, 17:36:54 UTC

“The experience must be complete.” She intoned. “Understanding must be gained.”

She continued downward, watching him. None of the pretty-shiny on this boat was for him. He thought he was used to that, but sometimes, like now, it blindsided him.

I really enjoy deciphering River's comments while watching Jayne turn the words over in his own mind. They talk past each other so often that seeing them make connection in all the static is marvelous.

Well done.