Comments | eyesxofxcrimson: 100 Women - #030 - Homestuck

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100 Women - #030 - Homestuck - Kanaya

Oct 06, 2011 18:22

Title: Lipstick
Rating: PG
Warnings: SPOILERS
Words: 116
Series: Homestuck
Pairings/Characters: Kanaya

( Kanaya licks her upper lip and smirks. )

c: kanaya maryam, *challenge: 100 women, w: 101-200, rating: pg, s: homestuck

Comments 1

abacusaddict20 March 9 2012, 00:12:10 UTC

Ahhh this is perfectttt. Kanaya is so powerful at this moment in homestuck and you managed to portray that without making her seem out of character in any way. She is a lady, first and foremost, and not necessarily a scary-violent lady when powerful and this shows that perfectly. Also the metaphor of medicinal grape flavored blood is perfect. I know exactly the taste and I know the dissatisfaction at tasting it. Flawless.