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Drabbles/Unfinished Stuff Part 1 - Hetalia - Various

Aug 31, 2010 00:00

Basically, I have these sitting here and wanted to post them. I have many others, but they're either just word-scribbles or in notebooks back in my house. They're also out of date-order, but whatever.

Not putting anything intended to be a part of a challenge, here, just so you know.

Gist of what's happening: Alfred is a teenage father, he's ( Read more... )

c: russia (ivan braginsky), c: america (alfred f. jones), c: catherine ii (the great), s: axis powers hetalia, c: austria (roderich edelstein), c: france (francis bonnefoy), c: england/uk (arthur kirkland), c: spain (antonio fernandez carriedo), c: canada (matthew williams), c: vietnam, c: belarus (natalia alfroskaya)

Comments 2

talkstoearth August 31 2010, 23:36:17 UTC

1. Aw...I wish you'd finished this. It's so sad and...aw. I love the way you write this weird family thing. The father son relationship of fail, the boy who has to grow up and take care of the kid. The dialogue feels really appropriate too.

2. France is a creepy blackmail thing. And I love it. I think you wrote the characters in here really well. I...wish that I had more to say about this one. XD;

3. Pff, did you just do that? Really? Also, you are OBSESSED with the idea of shoulders, I swear. It's amusing though! I'm curious about what's next here...Not my favorite though ( ... )

vehira September 1 2010, 02:28:32 UTC

1. Yeah, I dunno, I just like writing about failure families.

2. I wish I could finish it XD;; I'd like to, I just haven't had the inspiration. Damn you, Mr. Russell!

3. IN MY HEAD IT WAS GOING SOMEWHERE REALLY NEAT. I just...don't remember where that somewhere was ;_;

4. ♥

5. After re-reading it, I was like, "...what normal pair of brothers would actually do that? Oh well." I like it mostly for all the dialogue.

6. Can you really not guess? And hence why I didn't finish it XD;; I couldn't make sense of how it would physically happen.

7. I NEED TO FIND WHERE TO PUT IT. I'm thinking in that long-ass fic.

8. Mmhm~ after that game I was like, "dlakdfa *writes fic*" because I can definitely see it happening. I think this was before their first game against each other, so there was that whole thing.

9. Yeah, I don't even know. I think I did just want to write Bela for once, but also wanted to write an AmeriBela. And...this strange thing came out.

10. Well that's not necessarily a bad thing ( ... )