[October Drabble] Smoke/Screen
[24] Smoke/Screen
*takes a deep breath* This was the drabble that I decided not to post on a Sunday. Not because it's blasphemous, but because it's a Sunday and I didn't want to be depressed on the last day of the weekend, right before school ( Read more... )
*takes a deep breath* This was the drabble that I decided not to post on a Sunday. Not because it's blasphemous, but because it's a Sunday and I didn't want to be depressed on the last day of the weekend, right before school ( Read more... )
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You slay me with your words, you really do. I know I'm an oversensitive idiot, especially concerning Thrill Pair, but oh. Just...OW.
A part of me still doesn't actually believe their relationship would turn out like that--beyond the idealistic fangirl part of me, I really don't think their dynamics would lead down quite that path--but the way you write them in this situation that's already happened,you do it believably.
Painfully.
Oh Thrill Pair. ::clings:: I will make it better. I just wrote fluff for them and was debating about putting off posting until tomorrow, but you changed my mind. XP
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So funny that you mention the smoking...tonight of all nights. *sighs*
This is painful, but it...it comforts me. I like it. Then again, I write Gabriel and Reed; so are you all that surprised?
In second-to-last sentence you want the word 'sadist', not masochist. Because he's hurting Ryoma by making Ryoma want to keep living...sorta. ^^; Or DO you want masochist, as Fuji's willingly entering the relationship he knows is gonna be abusive? If that's the case then play up Fuji's pre-awareness of what Ryoma will do.
I love it.
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