Fic: Hourglass

[extrasolar]

Title: Hourglass
Category: Smallville
Word Count: 1414
Date of Completion: 10 August 2009
Primary Characters: Clark Kent, Lois Lane
Rating: R/NC-17
Setting: post-season 8
Summary: On significance.
Additional Notes: Written for Annie M (as part of Divine Intervention's summer ficstravaganza 2009); serenography has dedicated a piece of artwork to this story: A

Comments

[noblealice]

Wow. I just love love loooove the way you write Smallville fic. Your descriptions are fantastic and out-of-the-ordinary and other-worldly and you make the characters relateable and likable again!

This paragraph especially was brilliant:
You came back, he thought. You came back to me. Your heartbeat was the metronome of my life, the ticking of the clock. There was no time without her; her clock disappeared - away from Clark. But you're back, you're back, you're mine, he thought. There is time. There is ticking.

[penumbra]

Thankyou. :D

[theclexfactor]

This was beyond beautiful. Speechless.

[penumbra]

Thankyou.

[pueblo_01]

OMG this was awesome and now my eyes hurt cuz I didn't blink till I was done reading it lol... Your words flowed nicely and gave the emotion I so truly believe Clark should be feeling for those three months she is gone. Well done.

[penumbra]

I hope you didn't dry your eyes out too much. Thankyou.

[pueblo_01]

they were sore for a bit but it was well worth it :)

[eternal_moonie]

totally love it.

[penumbra]

Thanks.

[ctbn60]

Nicely done. Loved the imagery! You really captured a moment between the two of them. I enjoyed this!

[penumbra]

Thankyou!