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Fic: Vers: V: Time's a Crooked Bow

May 23, 2009 19:48

Parts: I | II | III | IV | V | VI | VII

( I don't want to be pried apart. I want to bloom suddenly, violently, time-lapsed, coaxed. )

vers, fic: smallville

Comments 16

So Good it Hurts angel_clair May 24 2009, 02:52:23 UTC

I've said this to you before with another piece but I am always dumbfounded by how really extraordinarily good your writing is. I've read a lot of fanfic over the last several years and much of it has been good for one reason or another but it is rare to find something this beautiful. Can't wait to read more.

penumbra May 24 2009, 18:08:08 UTC

Thankyou.

brijeana May 24 2009, 20:57:35 UTC

GRR! Lois!

You used my fave line as the cut link <3

Oh when the tree burst out of her chest! That took my breath away... that kiss. Wow!

I loved the description of her relationship with Oliver and his apartments.

Lovely chapter... as always.

penumbra September 16 2009, 00:31:52 UTC

Thankyou (lol four months later).

_touched May 27 2009, 05:08:59 UTC

This is so beautiful and it makes me ache, in such a good way. Then again, it makes me wanna channel my inner!Gibbs and smack Clark on the back of his head, for taking the out that Lois gave him. Once again, beautiful imagery. :)

penumbra September 16 2009, 00:32:33 UTC

Oh, but Clark will almost always take a romantic out. Thankyou (and sorry this reply is so late).