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Jul 13, 2008 10:44

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Heroes | Mohinder/Sylar
NC17 | 1890 words

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*grins wildly* original_tinks July 13 2008, 18:04:46 UTC

I only have one ltitle nitpick thingie ma-jig...if you do asphyxiation just right you can make an orgasm pop...remember that. Unless you were going for the more 'using it as torture' thing...then it was excellent! =D

Whoo! I asked for breathplay and got breathplay! Who wants to do bloodplay for me next!? But with a twist! Sylar has to be the one getting, cut, whipped whatever!
[HEART YOU BTW FOR FULFILLING MY SICK WISHES! LOL]

Re: *grins wildly* atthevenue July 13 2008, 18:07:14 UTC

I was using it for torture, but technically I did write some drabbles where I used it as sexual but it just didn't flow right with the story so I left it out.

Oh, I didn't even know about that... so, you're welcome? XD

Re: *grins wildly* original_tinks July 13 2008, 18:18:28 UTC

A happy coincidence then =D

mabetini July 13 2008, 18:34:35 UTC

WEEE NON CON!
Oh poor, poor Mohinder. I feel bad for him but I do love a Sylar that takes what he wants, when he wants it!!!
Awesome fic!!!

atthevenue July 13 2008, 18:35:46 UTC

Aw, thanks so much. I do love a persistent Sylar.

megmatthews20 July 13 2008, 23:19:50 UTC

Creepy non-con ftw!

You definitely have down Sylar's sociopathic (take whatever I want no matter what) personality down...

Poor Mohinder. :(

This was described very vividly...and was creepily hot.

cheers

atthevenue July 13 2008, 23:23:39 UTC

Believe it or not, I get my inspiration for Sylar's cockiness and personality from my friend Wesley. He is not, however, a sociopathic killer. XD

:( Yes, poor Mohinder... but he does make for some good fics when he's forced to do stuff...

Oh, wow, thanks so much. I've never written NC-17 Mylar fic before, the closest match to anything possibly relating would be one m/m kiss... so I was really cautious to write this...