how to shoot a moving target [fic] (riza-centric)

[amorphic]

title. how to shoot a moving target
series. Fullmetal Alchemist
character/pairing. Riza-centric, slight Roy/Riza
prompt. 19 // Even we are still children (written for 31_days_exchnge)
rating. PG
word count. 2500
summary. Riza has never had much difficulty hitting targets, but there are times she wishes she could miss
disclaimer. Fullmetal Alchemist belongs to

Comments

[zelha]

I loved this piece! Riza's growth and how she learned to shoot and the importance of being Roy's protector was expertly played in this story. Well played! :)

[amorphic]

Oh, thank you so much! ♥

[amorphic]

Oh thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it! ♥

And your icon is totally awesome! ^^

[starseed4]

Interesting take on Riza and the events that led to her joining the military. I like how you showed her growth as the fic went on and of course the little Royai thrown in. ;)

[amorphic]

Haha, how could I resist chucking in a little RoyAi? >.^ Thanks for reading, sweetie! ♥

[cornerofmadness]

I really loved this look into Riza learning how to shoot, her thoughts on it and why she's doing it.

[amorphic]

Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it! And LOL for your icon XD

[cornerofmadness]

Spike and Dru were probably my favorite Buffy pairing of all time

[ater_somnium]

Hey! this was just really great!! Although, the characters were OC but they had their own strength.

Although, it was nice. Don't mind, it was good as a fanfiction but I can't imagine it ever clicking to the real FMA story. But if I ignore that fact, this was very good!

[amorphic]

Thank you! Yeah, that's the problem with OCs, it's very hard to fit them in with the canon, but I guess Riza had to learn how to shoot somewhere and this plot bunny wouldn't leave me alone so I wrote it, hurhur. XD