make me over [fic] (roy, riza, elysia, gracia)

[amorphic]

title. make me over
series. Fullmetal Alchemist
character/pairing. Roy, Elysia, Gracia, Riza [gen]
prompt. 17 // Children world (written for 31_days_exchnge)
rating. G
word count. 800
summary. Roy gets a makeover… and loses his reputation along the way
disclaimer. Fullmetal Alchemist belongs to Arakawa Hiromu

Comments

[azure15]

Aww, that was so cute! Roy's soft side letting Elysia make him up and look all pretty. Short, but incredibly sweet and well written.

“If you don’t mind,” Roy said, rising from his seat, “could I use your bathroom? Just to wash off the make-up.”

“You’re not going to leave it on?” Elysia asked petulantly. Again, Gracia caught his eye but, this time, failed to hide her amusement.

“I… I… oh yes, of course, how silly of me.”

“Yes, Uncle Roy was just being silly. Now, I’m sure he’d like to go home and relax on what’s left of his Sunday.” she smiled and walked him to the door.

Was my favourite exchange.

[amorphic]

Hee, everyone gives in to Elysia otherwise Maes will come to haunt them XD

I'm glad you enjoyed it! ♥

[tobu_ishi]

Ohhh, my goodness. This gave me a wonderful laugh. I can just see poor stolid well-meaning Roy uneasily letting her scribble away on his face, wondering how on earth he'd get out of this with his dignity intact. ♥

I do have to wonder, though, what color that polish was...and whether Hawkeye will tell the office, or just hold on to the information and use it to squeeze him into doing his paperwork on time for the next week and a half...

[amorphic]

Ohoho, what a wonderful idea for a sequel! Oh, the blackmail potential! *is giddy* I think Hawkeye is too clever to let go of that ammunition, I'm sure she's not above using blackmail >.^

(And in my mind, the nail polish was pink XD)

I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks so much for reading! ♥

[tobu_ishi]

*chuckles* I am happy to have given you a bunny! (Have a carrot to tide it over? ♥ )

Y'know, I was once involved in a plot to keep a guy friend from finding out how one removes nail polish, once one has applied it and allowed it to dry. Apparently it's not common male knowledge...?

Mmm, pink. It'll set off his complexion so gently. ^^

[amorphic]

'Omnomnom!' says the bunny, 'Thank you for the carrot!'

Seriously? Man, guys are really really thick *is amazed at their stupidity, even though she really shouldn't be*

Yes, it's a lovely shade, pink. I was imagining a soft, delicate shade, although I suppose something more garish would be more humiliating, hm? ^^

BTW, love your icon! ♥

[evil_little_dog]

AHAHAHAHA.

(*wants for fma_ot4, pleaaaaeezze?*)

[amorphic]

Oh, does this count for fma_ot4? Ohoho, sorry, I'll post it there now =)

I'm glad you enjoyed it! Oh, Roy, you're such a well-meaning dork XD

[evil_little_dog]

I think it does. *grins* I'd even say the Elicia breaks Maes' glasses story does, too!

[amorphic]

Oh cool, so it does extend to mostly gen fics XD

[dustbunny105]

Haha, poor Roy! This is such a cute fic!

You have "you feminine side" instead of "your feminine side" down at the end there, but otherwise the mechanics are clean. I like the flow and the tone of this, very easy-going and sweet.

[amorphic]

Thanks for pointing that out! It's fixed now =)

And thank you for reading! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

[hikaru_9]

I giggled so hard <3

[amorphic]

Yay! I'm glad to hear that! ^^

Thank you so much for reading! ♥