DAY SEVEN 💫 #61 (com)promises
Prompt : # 61
Title : (com)promises
Pairing : suho/d.o.
Rating : pg
Warning/s : N/A
Summary : Moving in together is not as romantic as films paint it to be.
Author’s note : This prompt is so promising but I got the worst bout of writer's block halfway through so I sadly didn't live up to what this prompt could be :-( to the mods, thank you for ( Read more... )
Title : (com)promises
Pairing : suho/d.o.
Rating : pg
Warning/s : N/A
Summary : Moving in together is not as romantic as films paint it to be.
Author’s note : This prompt is so promising but I got the worst bout of writer's block halfway through so I sadly didn't live up to what this prompt could be :-( to the mods, thank you for ( Read more... )
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i really liked the structure of this fic, how you introduced the history of their relationship and how you then took it back to the present. the way they fell in love read as very natural and it made me feel warm even though it was kept short
i enjoyed seeing how affectionate they are, how genuinely they love each other and how they still seem ~newly in love even after such a long time together. especially loved the moment where ksoo tells baekhyun about the many things he likes abt jm
And it's not just his couch anymore-it's theirs. And so are the curtains, the TV, the bookshelves, the entire flat. It's theirs, a shared living space, a home. really loved this part >< it nicely shows the change in perspective that comes wth moving in together ( ... )
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