Ben 10 | The Color Green (Ch 9, End)

[exlibris_tenisu]

Oh God, this story is barely 400 words shy of being 30,000 words. HOW DO I DO THAT OMG. ;_; This was so not that long when I got the original idea for it. >>; Man, I also meant for this chapter to be much shorter, pretty much just with Ben fixing Kevin with the Omnitrix, but clearly that is not what happened

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[saiika_von_maou]

*sighs* Finally, I get the fulfilled, satisfied and happy feeling from this story, just like I knew I would when it was finally over. :3 You really are fantastic.

A few lines I absolutely adored: ,i>“You talkin’ dirty t’me, Tennyson?” Brought a cute charm to Ben's "Yes, do it now!", which without Kevin's little comeback I likely would have found kind of awkward. :D

Fucking hell, what was with the Tennysons? They got all wound up about the stupidest shit, and then the stuff you expected them to blow up over, they accepted without batting an eyelash. This is such a Kevin thing to be baffled over. I love it.

"Who d'you think gave me the condoms?" Um. Yes. Brilliant ending line.

All in all, I'm very happy about this. GREAT story. :3

[ad_exia]

XD I'm such a sap, I have to end things on a good note. <3 I'm so glad you liked it!

Ahaha, yeah, I totally wrote Ben being all, "OMGDOITNOW" and then I realized, gee, that sounds pretty dirty. Kevin would so notice that. ;D And yeah, Tennysons can be so weird sometimes... they all are really very alike, so Kevin has a unique point of view as an outsider. And is confused. >D

Hee, I imagine Gwen probably kept them around in case Kevin ever, you know, admitted feelings for her, but then she realized that they could go to better use?

<333 I really am so glad you enjoyed it so much! Thank you for reading it~ :D

[saiika_von_maou]

Being a sap is good. :3 I loved it.

You're so in tune with Kevin's thoughts throughout this whole thing; it's amazing. I envy that a little...

XD

You're welcome! <3 And thank you for writing it! :3

[ad_exia]

XD I don't know how that happened, seeing as if I had to identify with anyone on the show, I think it would be Ben. But I guess that's why it was easier not to write from his POV - I knew what he was thinking and what he'd do already, so it was more fun to challenge myself into trying to figure out what goes on in Kevin's head. XD He's definitely my favorite character~

:D <3

[tonks17]

YAY! Happy ending! X3

I loved your little "But wait! There's more!" I giggled.

And um... well geez, how can I leave you with anything I haven't already? Um... the dialogue was fantastic, what with the awkwardness coupled with the feelings stuff. Poor Kevin. Always having to talk about his feelings.

And the ending. Was fucking fantastic.

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:D

XD Somehow that scene popped into my head and wouldn't go away. So I had to tack it onto the end or face the wrath of my brain.

Haha, I swear, the next time Ben tries to get Kevin to talk about his feelings, I think he's just going to tell him no and pounce him. ::dies:: I wouldn't blame him.

XDD Thank you so much~ <333 Totally glad you enjoyed it!

[pan2dapan]

HOLY FUCKING HELL I LOVE YOU.

FOR SERIOUS.

I NEED TO GO READ THIS AGAIN LIKE NOW.

[ad_exia]

XD <333 I AM GLAD YOU LIKE IT. :D

[ad_exia]

Thank you so much! <3 I'm glad you enjoyed it, and thank you for reading!

[ad_exia]

:D Thanks so much~! I'm glad you liked it!