Ben 10 | The Color Green (Ch 7)

[exlibris_tenisu]

So this is where things get a little... weird. Because unfortunately this stuff works much better as a visual - I mean, it's kind of like trying to describe Ben's experiences in "X = Ben + 2" (best episode title ever, BTW~) in words instead of visuals. Buuut seeing as I cannot exactly animate my own episode, this will just have to do. XD; So if it

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[saiika_von_maou]

*runs around in circles* WHY DO YOU DO THIS TO ME?????

I can't even form a proper...sentence! I just...there are so many things I want to note about this that I thought...were just...briliant! But I can't because of that cliffhanger!

*runs around in more circles* OH MY GOD, KEVIN; WHAT THE HELL HAPPENED TO KEVIN?????????

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::diiiies:: I'm sorry, I'm sorry! It was just that if I didn't end it there it would've gotten really long and besides, I kind of have to figure out what exactly happened, myself. :D;; Uh... so does it make him Kevin 13 if you count Alien X as two? XD

[saiika_von_maou]

Ahhh, GEEZ. INTENSE. (Pfft, Kevin 13. Can't make a pun from his name on that one.)

Okay, I'm better now. Whew. God, that was just...GEEZ. That was fucking amazing. I seriously screamed out loud with Ben, "No! Kevin, stop!" Family's wondering what the hell is wrong with me. XD And now I'm imagining Ben's words when Kevin wakes up, "You promised!"

I was also wondering about Kevin's thoughts while Gwen was, um...meditating...did she, by any chance, happen to catch wind of those thoughts? Just a curiosity; I don't expect it to be answered. I can just wait and see. :3

I still want to run around in more circles. I'm wondering now, one, if Ben's disease is still there (though by the blue eyes Kevin saw, it probably is); and two, how they're going to fix Kevin. If they do. I hope this ends happily.

Fucking amazing.

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(Haha, yeah... There must be some way to make it funny. I'm just not sure what it is. XD Kevin-bakers-dozen? Not so funny...)

<33 Oh, Ben is going to be so pissed when this is all over. He'll never, ever let Kevin hear the end of it that he promised and then totally disregarded it. (Please don't let your family think you are dying. XDD <3)

AHAHAHA Oh God. That would be fantastic, if Gwen knew what Kevin was thinking. MAYBE SHE DID. I hadn't thought of that, actually, but don't be surprised if I sneak that one in~ ;D It would be not a bad way to, uh, explain things to her?

If it makes you feel any better, I am a huge sap. So it's at least very likely that there will be a happy ending? :D <3 Seriously, I'm so psyched you guys all like it so much~

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<3

As soon as I figure out what's going on, I'll write it out as fast as possible! I think I know what's going to happen, I just have to make sure the story obeys me. :D;

[tonks17]

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You're killing me here! My god! I want to know what's going to happen!!! GODDAMN YOU CLIFFHANGER OF DOOOOOOOOM!!!! D8

I'm going to sit here dying to know what's going to happen. I MUST KNOW!!!! AAAAAAAH!!!

Now, on to some coherency. I love the way you had Gwen restore Kevin's powers, I love that Kevin's powers automatically drained on her, I love the description of Ben's energy, and I love Kevin's determination. Holy shit I love this thing so hard.
And Kevin's vague but naughty thoughts? I laughed very much. :D

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I'm sorry, I knew I was going to be lynched for that but apparently I went ahead and did it anyway. ::faaaail:: I just figured that if I didn't split this part up, it would get really freaking long and I try to post every 3,000 words or so; this was already on the long side, oops? XD

Seriously, as soon as I can put into words how this thing goes down, there will be posting!

<3 I'm really glad you liked it~ It's good that it makes sense to other people! :D I want to know exactly what he came up with.

[saiika_von_maou]

AGREED. AGREED ONE-HUNDRED-FUCKING-PERCENT.

[pan2dapan]

FHQWHGADS!!!

MY GOD I LOVE THIS STORY. JESUSJAQUES.

MY WORDS FAIL ME.

JUST ENJOY MY FANGIRL FLAILING FOR NOW.

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XDDD <3 THANK YOU I AM GLAD YOU LIKE IT WHEE~ :DD