Ben 10 | The Color Green (Ch 4)

[exlibris_tenisu]

So! Ahaha, finally~ This scene has mutated a number of times since I first wrote it, but I finally felt like it was a good place to put it in. Before it was way too soon (I had the whole thing so that Kevin tried to kiss Ben on the couch and then Ben followed him into the kitchen and then most of this went down), but like I said I wasn't happy with

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[saiika_von_maou]

I didn't expect them to get right into smoochies right away, but I am SO glad they did! And the way it was done wasn't rushed either! It was like Kevin said-"This is what it is." You just filled me full of squee and happy. Why are you so bloody BRILLIANT?

I just...I can't get over how...SIMPLE the execution was...just...I mean, Kevin's words really do sum it all up and it WORKS. GAH. Awesome. Now I'm REALLY frickin' excited for the next chapter! Update soon! <3

[ad_exia]

XD That was why I kept redoing this scene, I think - it always seemed awfully, fast, but I kind of came to the conclusion that Kevin is one of those "actions speak louder than words" sort of guys. Ben would want to talk it out, but Kevin would just do something. In this case, "something" just ended up being "kissing". XDD

I'm glad it worked! :D Now I have to figure out how to break the news to Gwen. XD I think they might neglect to do that for a while...

[saiika_von_maou]

Well, this way, it's like there's always more to do...which is really neat and unique to most other stories. And it's totally IC for Kevin too; cuz I mean, he totally IS a "do things now and asks questions, WHY?" kind of dude.

Lol, that'll be funny. ^^ Can't wait for the repercussions of that one. "Uh, yeah, we were totally going to tell you that we were kissing while you were contacting Grandma...next week..." Lol. XD

[ad_exia]

Yeah, Kevin doesn't talk so much as act. And then he just expects everyone else to be okay with that. XD

Ahahaha. That should totally be how it happens. |D I can just see Gwen's eyebrow twitching now. XD

[tonks17]

Dude. Do you know what you made me do? I got up from where I was reading and danced a happy dance. An honest-to-God HAPPY DANCE. There would have been squee's involved too, but I'm sharing a house. Probably shouldn't alert them other people why I'm squeeing. BUT IT'S SQUEE-WORTHY. OH SO SQUEE-WORTHY.

I can't even pick a favorite part. It's all too amazing. <3

[ad_exia]

XD Happy dance FTW! (That is AWESOME~ I'm going to do a happy dance because you did a happy dance, at this rate!)

Glad you liked it~ :D

[smileberry]

Hello once again!

I'm so happy you upload so fast (unlike me D:) and we get to see read the chapters closer together :D It makes me smile. But on with the real review XD

Damn does Kevin really know what he wants! He went right for Ben's first kiss :P It might seem rush to some, yet it falls right in sync with the other episodes and how Kevin thinks and acts. I loved it, specially since Ben was willing to make it easier to Kevin, because he, just like Kevin, knows what he wants.

I can tell all this by how you write them XD I hope Gwen gets grandma Verdona soon so Ben can get cured and keep kicking alien booty just like now I feel better :D (btw, thank you for wishing me well (: ♥) and I can not wait to see what happens next! I'm loving this story as much as I loved this one other story by Roseduelist04 called "The Wedding", just like her, the way you take the story and the themes you use and so are how I pictured them getting together that seemed so real and...!!!!!!!! I'm so happy X3!

♥

[ad_exia]

XD When I work on something I'm really excited about, I tend to write quickly (at least when I have the time!). This part I actually had written a while ago, and just needed to pad it a bit; now I'm at the end of what I had a head start on, so it might take a couple of days to write more, but I'm still gung-ho!

XD Kevin's a little... fast, yeah~ But Ben understands that, I think, even if he wasn't quite expecting that, heh~

I'm glad you're feeling better! :D Hopefully Ben will get better soon as well~ And ooh, I may have to go check out that fic you mentioned! It sounds cool. :D

lol

[anonymous]

“And the second you’re on your feet again... well. Don’t expect t’stay there long.”

That line had me laughing for near a good minute.

Re: lol

[ad_exia]

XD I am glad to amuse~