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despistadaohno September 17 2011, 17:05:08 UTC
This was so beautiful and lovely. Thank you for writing it <3

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exmanhater September 18 2011, 00:36:33 UTC
Thank you so much, that is a wonderful compliment! I'm really glad you enjoyed it :)

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elliemurasaki September 17 2011, 18:55:20 UTC
*delight*

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exmanhater September 18 2011, 00:37:00 UTC
Thank you, I'm happy you liked it!

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false_alexis September 18 2011, 03:53:21 UTC
Great work! I liked Anna's touch of awkwardness, combined with her worldliness from having done the human thing before.

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exmanhater September 18 2011, 07:14:15 UTC
Thank you very much! I had wanted to spend some more time building Anna's second "fall," so I'm really glad to hear that she comes across that way :)

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philomel September 19 2011, 06:52:09 UTC
Really lovely! :) I especially enjoyed the little details of Anna slipping Jo tiny gifts and slowly getting closer to her through them.

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exmanhater September 19 2011, 20:36:46 UTC
Thank you! The idea of Anna surreptitiously giving Jo presents was the inspiration for the whole story, actually, so I'm very happy that you liked that :)

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cantarina1 September 19 2011, 23:03:25 UTC
Really enjoyed this :)

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exmanhater September 20 2011, 01:46:00 UTC
That's awesome to hear, thank you!

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