Inside Out

Mar 29, 2007 01:05

There are days when little one is scared and hurt, recalling pain of days gone by. She wants to hide her face from the world, keep herself safe inside where no one can see or hear, where no one can hurt her again. She doesn't want to let people in because people can do bad things - they can yell and scream and insult and abandon and blame and ( Read more... )

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anonymous March 29 2007, 07:55:30 UTC
Hmmm - interesting that we've both taken a similar theme from this week's topic! Interesting piece...

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Ooops! notinventedhere March 29 2007, 07:57:34 UTC
That was me, in case it's not obvious! Must remember to log in...

:-)

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Re: Ooops! baby_rissa_chan March 29 2007, 14:21:13 UTC
I made a similar mistake yesterday, compounded with accidentally posting it in a reply rather than as a separate post, so I can't say I blame you. And I'm glad you thought it interesting. There's a lot of backstory to this one.

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tokio March 29 2007, 15:24:25 UTC
The first line really grabbed me. I liked this a lot. It's serious but I see a child-like sincerity and hopefulness in it.

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baby_rissa_chan March 29 2007, 19:47:20 UTC
I'm glad you liked it. As I told notinventedhere, it had a lot of backstory. It means a lot to know that other people like it, too.

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thyexecutioner March 29 2007, 21:30:19 UTC
Put the topic in bold in the subject line or in the body of the entry.

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baby_rissa_chan March 30 2007, 04:39:37 UTC
Fixed!

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