wait for summertime [for discrepancy]

Apr 24, 2016 12:39

Title: wait for summertime
Recipient: discrepancy
Rating: R
Pairing: B.I/Bobby
Length: 3.3k
Summary: It's not what Hanbin expected out of the student council MT, but it's a hell of a lot better.
Notes: shout out to everyone who wishes they were at the beach right now! thanks to r for looking over this for me and thanks mods for your patience~ i'm sorry this ( Read more... )

pairing: bobby/b.i, round: 2016, rating: r

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concordances April 28 2016, 19:34:35 UTC
I'm not usually one for double b fics (let alone double b porn), but I gave this a go and what do you know!! I really enjoyed it *__* I thought the beach setting was really fun and atmospheric, and I loved your serious, awkward hanbin. Hanbin makes his way over to his people omg I laughed out loud. I liked the subtle contrast between him and bobby, and if I had to pick a favourite part in the fic it would have to be:

"Or. You don't have to pretend."

Jiwon shifts closer on the bed. "You," he says, hands cupping Hanbin's face so that Hanbin is forced to look at him, "are so fucking awkward."

Not just because of the awkwardness but also the tension!! By that point I was chanting kiss kiss kiss in my head so everything that followed was really satisfying, heh. This was such a nicely packaged fic with a bit of everything in it, thanks for sharing!!!

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kalopsia April 29 2016, 01:40:02 UTC
i!! love!! your!! hanbin!! omg he's so awkward and uncomfortable in his own skin u__u and i love that contrast with bobby who's so... easy about everything, and flirty, and the way he makes hanbin's life so hard just by existing. Jiwon shifts closer on the bed. "You," he says, hands cupping Hanbin's face so that Hanbin is forced to look at him, "are so fucking awkward." this line literally made me crack up... like the true epitome of romance... smooth talker bobby.

oh and "You make it so hard to enforce the fucking dress code."

Hanbin can feel Jiwon's laughter on his skin. "You know, I've heard that my hips don't lie," i love this casual dialogue in between sex. why is all your dialogue so good.

as an aside i loved your junhwe He was a little drunk and about three minutes away from falling asleep on Junhoe's shoulder in the middle of the restaurant. Junhoe had also been drunk, otherwise he wouldn't have let it happen. omg this cute cactus... and hanbin/june/hayi being the sourpusses still sitting on the sand, refusing to have ( ... )

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kapike May 29 2017, 23:37:33 UTC
OMG YOU!!! THIS WAS AWWWWESOME! I love that they got stuck in a kings size bed! And the whole part where Hanbin wakes up hard against Bobby and tries to roll away is great! The smut was nice as well! This was awesome!!!!! I enjoyed it so much! Thanks so much for posting and writing this! oxoxoxoxoxoxox

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