342: Photograph

[exceptindreams]

"Photograph

Comments

[eithni]

A day late, but yes, exactly.

[shoelaceswitch]

but I'm still time zones away
from who I was the day before we met
you were the first mile
where my heart broke a sweat

That is absolutely perfect. I love how simple and striking the language of this poem is.

[magicalweasal]

I've been wrapping one night stands
around my body like wedding bands
but none of them fit in the morning
they just slip off my fingers and slip out the door

My favorite line.

[akakak04]

heartbreaking.

truly heartbreaking.

[sweet_raindrops]

This really speaks to me. It is a beautiful and terribly sad poem.