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ivysoul December 12 2013, 20:20:24 UTC
Beautiful.

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versipellis December 12 2013, 20:49:33 UTC
I really like the riff on the original, and the sentiment, but I think for me the original also overshadows this. It's still interesting to read though!

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animaltime December 14 2013, 10:03:12 UTC
Love this.

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flashfly December 15 2013, 11:00:57 UTC
And a shout out to the first line of Dante's Inferno. I liked it all around!

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buymeaclue January 6 2018, 00:15:20 UTC
So I have been steadily, steadily working my way through the archives. I know at this point I’m past where I started reading in the first place. But many still feel new to me. And this is exactly the poem I needed tonight.

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