How do you do it!? I can't help hearing a voice when I put all of your selections together in my head. It's a familiar voice and I really enjoy hearing it! I have been away for a little while, so I need to catch up. This is another beautiful piece! Thank you!
I love the start of this one and then the last dozen lines, though the middle (from "It was dark then too" through to "the stone walls") sort of loses me. I guess what I like most in this is the play between poetry and visual art, and also the list-y quality of the end, and the middle's different, more questions and less certainty.
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