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jeweledhibiscus May 6 2013, 04:30:52 UTC
This is a beautiful poem, and your writing is exquisite -- as in, it is both lovely and delicate, the tracing of frost on Southern grass in the winter mornings before it melts into dew and vanishes.

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exceptindreams May 7 2013, 19:56:59 UTC
Thank you. I feel honored that you'd describe something I wrote like that!

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lokifan May 6 2013, 08:40:35 UTC
Thanks, I love this one!

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versipellis May 6 2013, 09:30:39 UTC
I love the specifics and use of objects and memories in both the poem and your writing.

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__fasterfaster May 6 2013, 18:22:58 UTC
Love Jeffrey McDaniel, love your passage at the end. I identify very strongly right now with the feeling you describe.

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ivysoul May 6 2013, 20:31:21 UTC
Yes. Yes. Yes. To all of this.

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