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buymeaclue April 4 2013, 11:01:39 UTC
Wow. Yikes.

I think most people have a story or two they keep working and reworking on.

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versipellis April 4 2013, 16:32:14 UTC
I love the portrayal of "after the apocalypse" here, and the ending - which I kind of feel totally fits with the story of Lot's wife and has a very fairy-tale/primal/symbolic quality to it.

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lokifan April 8 2013, 01:25:16 UTC
Fantastic!

Have you read John Agard's Lot's wife poem?

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exceptindreams April 8 2013, 19:16:58 UTC
I have not. Do you know where I could find it?

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lokifan April 8 2013, 19:22:32 UTC
http://lokifan.livejournal.com/249858.html - I posted it as part of my National Poetry Month posts. De-filtered so you can see.

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exceptindreams April 11 2013, 04:23:06 UTC
Thank you! I hadn't read that before. I'm going to wait a while so that to post it so that there isn't an overflow of Lot's wife poetry, but this is lovely!

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