Comments | exceptindreams: 1155: Miscarriage and Echo

exceptindreams

Apr 19, 2011 21:33

Warning: This poem is about a miscarriage ( Read more... )

Comments 9

bubblingbeebles April 20 2011, 01:47:24 UTC

very pretty. i love how the tone captures the sense of the moment.

g_esquared April 20 2011, 07:56:25 UTC

that is exactly what i was thinking! it's sort of halting and yet very succinctly put. incredibly done.

dreaminventor April 20 2011, 14:48:59 UTC

captures the moment, while also heart breaking.

two_grey_rooms April 20 2011, 02:05:31 UTC

i love this. particularly the last line.

intra_linear April 20 2011, 02:59:29 UTC

This is heartbreaking

ghostsandlovers April 20 2011, 18:18:14 UTC

Wonderful. The line "I was reading a book I won't read again" caused me a violent shiver.

bubblingbeebles April 21 2011, 02:51:13 UTC

yeah, wow. that was quite something. o_o

stoicsobriety April 21 2011, 16:02:59 UTC

the symbols took my breath away.

and finally, poetry in verse. not in prose masquerading as poetry.